Dumnezeu a făcut cea mai sacră faptă şi anume a creat pe bărbat şi femeie. Dîndu-le o posibilitate de a realiza dorinţa, a crea o familie. Familia este un grup de oameni care se ajută unul pe altul. Ea poate fi formată din mai mulţi membri : mama, tata, frate, soră şi alţii. Familia este generaţie. Creşterea copiilor este rolul oricărui părinte, de a da educaţie.
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Family is the most special masterpiece created by nature
God did the most sacred thing of all – He created the man and the woman. He gave them the possibility of fulfilling their will, of creating a family. Family is a group of people who help each other. It can be made up by several members: mother, father, brother, sister and others. Family means generation. Children’s breeding, providing education, is the role of each parent.
Dernière édition ou validation par lilian canale - 18 Mai 2008 22:11
"the man and the woman" are two beings, so the former sentence should read "sacred beings of all"
He have them -----> He gave them
it can be made of several..----> it can be made up by several...
I would change the syntax of the last sentence into:
"Children’s breeding, providing education, is the role of each parent."
What do you think? Does any of these change the original meaning?
God did the most sacred thing of all – He created the man and the woman. He gave them the possibility of fulfilling their will, to create a family. Family is a group of people who help each other. It can be made of several members: mother, father, brother, sister and others. Family means generation. Raising children is the role of every parent, providing education.