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Titolo	the gods have already taught me not to stay away...
Teksto Submetigx per casper tavernello	Font-lingvo: Angla the gods have already taught me not to stay away from the nymph. they have already taught me how to say their prayers. a commission of oracles seems to reapear in every word you sing. their eyes look astonished with the spells you bring. they have already taught me to look at the clouds and fly but they haven't thaught me how to land my hands upon your dreams. one single flute note seems to make you sleep and my words would make, getting into your soul, a hundred chimeras wake [up].
Rimarkoj pri la traduko	I would like the rhymes to be kept: sing bring make wake

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Nymphe

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Botica

Cel-lingvo: Franca

Les dieux m'ont dÃ©jÃ enseignÃ©
de la nymphe rester prÃ¨s.

Ils m'ont dÃ©jÃ enseignÃ©
comment les prier.

Un ordre des oracles semble sorti
de chaque mot que tu chantes.
Leurs yeux semblent surpris
par tes charmes qui enchantent.

Ils m'ont dÃ©jÃ enseignÃ©
Ã regarder les nuages et voler

Mais ils ne m'ont pas enseignÃ©
comment sur tes rÃªves mes mains poser.

Une simple note de flÃ»te semble te faire sommeiller
et mes paroles pourraient,
une fois dans ton esprit entrÃ©es,
cent chimÃ¨res rÃ©veiller.

Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de Francky5591

- 22 Julio 2008 11:03

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	Aŭtoro	Afiŝo
		22 Julio 2008 11:04
	Francky5591 Nombro da afiŝoj: 12396	contrairement Ã "zut!", "flÃ»te prend un circonflexe"... ...mais excellente traduction, maÃ®tre Yoda!
		23 Julio 2008 01:11
	casper tavernello Nombro da afiŝoj: 5057	Hi Botica. I saw that you rhymed the 1st, 2nd, 4th and 5th verses. I would like it to rhyme on the 3rd and 5th. How can I do that? I thanks a lot for translating.
		23 Julio 2008 13:28
	Botica Nombro da afiŝoj: 643	clients always complain I'm not sure to understand what you want (it seems we've not the same definition of a verse), but I can propose that : Un ordre des oracles semble sorti de chaque mot que tu as chantÃ©. Leurs yeux semblent surpris par tes charmes qui les ont enchantÃ©. I don't find those poor rhymes in "Ã©" very pretty, but I've made what I could. Friendly.
		23 Julio 2008 18:38
	casper tavernello Nombro da afiŝoj: 5057	I'm not complaining, Botica. I just thought I wasn't clear enough in my remarks about my text. I was trying to say that the only things to rhyme here are the line 6 with the line 8, and the 14 with 16.