Traduko - Čina simpligita -Angla - 大家好！...

要英国英语

Literally:
Hello Everyone!
I am a graduate from the class of 2007. My name is Jia Xu. I was born in 1986 in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province. From 2004 to 2007, I studied at Taiyuan Science and Engineering University, in the Computer Science department. I feel extremely honoured and lucky to be able to have this opportunity to come to this company for an interview.
After my small success in academia described above, I felt especially happy and relieved, and now I carefully hope to offer my little power for the development of your company.

As can be seen from the literal translation above, I moved the first information given about the writer's graduation, and put it the information about the university, where it would most likely be found in an English text.

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