Seems quite good to me, but my Italian isn't good enough to tell exactly. Any help here please if you've got the time?
Here is a (fast) bridge from Dutch by me for those who don't read Dutch:
Flash of lightening
The heart is chemical
an enchanting night
and you already knew
you've met me before (/already)
I can barely believe it
but, you're so beautiful
I'm dying (because) of the light
Deep within my eyes
~Wonderful the mine [literally]
so impatient and so full of life
a ray of moonlight
that has fallen on me
~Wonderful the yours [literally]
who knows since how many winters
god damn it
that will be my death
My faith was blind
so blind for that smile
who has evaded it
who has blocked the road
There were signs
there were signals
Undecipherable numbers
that might have been hidden under the sees
~Wonderful the mine
so impatient and so full of life
a ray of moonlight
that has fallen on me
~Wonderful the yours
who knows since how many winters
god damn it
that will be my death
Thank you!
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