번역 - 터키어-영어 - SanayileÅŸmenin en belirgin ögesi teknoloji...

Hi Serba

You are my first client since I came back to my post

Your text will need a little editing as some of the phrases are strangely formulated and don't read very easily in English.

I'll post, below, a revised version and you let me know if it seems ok, then I'll set a poll. I'll post the suggested version later, as it's lunch time here so I have to go and eat mmmm Tomates provençales and mushrooms stuffed with soft cream cheese.

Bises
Tantine

Hi Serba,

It's me again

I'd like to suggest the following corrections, for the readability of the text. There were also one or two typos that I've "fixed".

The most evident component of industrialization is the ability of producing technology. You can have competitive superiority and the dissuasion of the defence system as well, in the case of your producing technology and using information to design products. Taking into consideration that no one would provide the means of giving someone else superiority, it is not possible for us to provide the dissuasionof the defence system, industrialization and progress through making the technology transfer alone.

Let me know if that looks ok, and I'll set a poll.

Bises
Tantine

This is a difficult translation. Here's my version:

The most obvious sign of industrialization is the ability to create technology. When you can create technology and use knowledge to design products, you can ensure your competitive advantage in the market and your forcefulness as a deterrent in defence systems. Since no-one would give something that assured his own advantage to someone else, our industrialization and development, and the assurance of our forcefulness as a deterrent in defence systems is not likely to occur solely by transferring technology.

Hi Kafetzou, Hi Serba

Thanks for your help Kaftzou

I'll set a poll (for the form!! I'm sure it's ok)

Bises
Tantine

the ability of producing --> the ability to produce
the dissuasion of the defence system = ???
in the case of your producing technology --> if you can produce technology
through making the technology transfer alone --> solely by transferring technology (?)

I have made the corrections as you said kafetzou thank you

Looks good!

Validated


Tantine