sevgili jane senin söylediğin gibi bankaya yazdım.fakat yanıt alamadım.güzelim bana yeni adresler ve telefonlar gerekli eğer gönderirsen yine denerim elimden geleni yaparım.Bilmiyorum başka neler yapabilirim. Senin tam yerin ve telefonunu bana yazarmısın.görüşmek dileğiyle.zekice
Dear Jane, I wrote to the bank as you said, but I couldn't have an answer. Sweetheart, I need new addresses and phone numbers. If you send them I will try again. I will do my best. I don't know what else I can do. Could you write to me your exact address and phone number? Hope to see you. Zekice
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I'd like you to be more careful about diacritics, caps and spaces. Just for you to compare:
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dear jane
I wrote to the bank as you told.but I couldn't have an answer. sweetheart I need new adresses and phone numbers if you send I will try again I will do my best.I don't know what else I can do. Could you write to me your exact adress and phone number.hope to see you.zekice