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Hi Tzicu,

How do you think this translation could be improved?
We'd like to know your suggestions.

Hello Lilly,

I appologize, I thought I sent my suggestions when I was asked to help with the evaluation.
These were my suggestions:

1. I didn't think to would find --> I didn't think I would find;
2. It must have been at least 25 years since we last me --> There must be at least 25 years since we last seen/met;
3. you've got two grown children --> you've got two grown up children;
4. I would place 'regularly' following the word
'Thérèse';
5. the first in the list --> the first on the list.

I hope it helps.

P.S. I have added the 2nd point now for I have just noticed it .

And if I may add:

1. On typing your name onto the Facebook search --> while/when typind your name to search on Facebook.

P.S. I have got the [bold] feature right this time. Yipee

on --> when
think --> expect
grown --> grown-up

good, only onto must be in the Facebook search

Merci pour tous vos efforts, cet e-mail a déjà été envoyé en anglais, et a été compris par la destinataire, ce qui me suffisait en l'occurence.

Bonne soirée à tous !