The import of motivation in the learning of English as a second language.
Thanks
I thank essentially God for giving me strength and enthusiasm to overcome so many hurdles. I thank Him for providing me with delightful moments and remarkable people that were very benevolent helping me reach this further objective. I thank my parents as well, for being some of the most precious people given to me by God.
Some corrections in order to make it sound more natural in English:
The import of motivation in the learning of English as a second language.
Thanks
I thank essentially God for giving me strength and enthusiasm to overcome so many hurdles. I thank Him for providing me with delightful moments and remarkable people that were very benevolent helping me (-) reach this further objective. I thank my parents as well, for being some of the most precious people given to me by God.