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हरफ Aneta B.द्वारा बुझाइएको	स्रोत भाषा: पोलिस WstrzymujÄ…c pÄ™d ku zatracie Jak to bÄ™dzie Panie gdy ma miÅ‚oÅ›Ä‡ siÄ™ trochÄ™ zmieni gdy bÄ™dÄ™ juÅ¼ tylko wspominaÄ‡ dni upojne w geÅ›cie i sÅ‚owie podÅ›wiadome czekanie na esemesy o siÃ³dmej nad ranem i te o drugiej przed snem - krÃ³tkim lecz obowiÄ…zkowym gdy miÅ‚osne obrazy zastygnÄ… juÅ¼ w wierszach a serce zacznie w koÅ„cu sÅ‚uchaÄ‡ i zatrzyma siÄ™ mÃ³j Å›lepy pÄ™d ku zatracie?
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी	British English

शीर्षक

Holding the rush toward self destruction

अनुबाद

अंग्रेजी

AleksanderSद्वारा अनुबाद गरिएको

अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने भाषा: अंग्रेजी

Holding the rush toward self destruction

How is this going to be, Lord
when my love changes a bit?
when all I do will be to remember
the ecstatic days in gesture and words?
subconscious waiting for SMSes
at seven in the morning
and those at two before falling into sleep
- a short yet obligatory one
when love images have eventually set in poems?
when my heart finally starts listening
and my blind rush to self destruction is over?

Validated by lilian canale

- 2009年 नोभेम्बर 9日 20:28

पछिल्ला सन्देशहरु

	लेखक	सन्देश
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 6日 23:59
	AleksanderS चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 17	I mean here "a lack of control over the love and desires..." Well, it seems that "annihilation" is totally wrong. I've not found a satisfactory replacement so far, temporary candidates being: - lose control - lose my mind - lose my senses Let's sleep with this problem, maybe tomorrow we'll solve it.
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 00:13
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Hehehe I count rather on English expert's help here... I think she will know it better...
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 01:48
	lilian canale चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972	Let's see...if I got your posts right I'd suggest: SMS-es ---> SMSes set in poems ---> crystallized in poems annihilation ---> emotional chaos? What do you say?
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 15:47
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	disarray?? Hm... emotional chaos? Hm... I'm not sure... But I like very much the rest of your suggestions, Lilly.
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 15:56
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Is this possible that English has no any equivalent for Polish noun "zatrata", "zatracenie siÄ™"?? It means emotional state when people love so much that they become blind, chaotic, difficult to communicate, crazy, sometimes even irresponsible and unpredictable in their today actions... The are totally in love...
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 16:02
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	I found in my dictionary only a verb "zatraciÄ‡" --> lose f.e. He seems to have lost all sens of time... Here I mean that I was near to lose myself... But here we need a noun from the verb... That is why I suggested "losseness" before...but probably it wasn't good one...
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 16:06
	lilian canale चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972	"doom"?
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 16:11
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	You are very close, Lilly, but this is not exactly the word yet... being lost/sink/plunged in[to] love --> ....?
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 16:34
	lilian canale चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972	OMG! self destruction? desperation? Kafetzou? Do you have any ideas? CC: kafetzou
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 16:51
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	O my God! hehe! destruction is the closest word for now... "rush for a destruction..." - it sounds quite good, but it should be more with love connotation...
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 18:07
	kafetzou चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 7963	infatuation? love sickness? obsession?
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 18:34
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Thank you Laura! Yes, sth between... Probably English language has no the exact equivalent... The one which I like the most from all the propositions and seems to be the most suitaible is "obsession"... "Rush for an obsession" - is it correct?
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 7日 19:16
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Oh! "self destruction" is also very good... rush/rushing to self distruction - maybe even better...
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 8日 15:15
	iluvmilka चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 77	can i just have one suggestion? in Britian we never say SMS but we use a word "text" it means the same thing but is more common and understandable
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 8日 16:49
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Yes, indeed! When I was staying in England, they didn't use "SMS" at all... They said rather: "I'll send you a text" (or: text message)...only this way... Thank you, Ania!
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 8日 16:55
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Moreover: There is a lack of the title in the translation.
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 8日 18:30
	AleksanderS चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 17	IMHO, self-destruction is too "physical". What about "self-confusion"?
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 8日 18:39
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Hm... I don't know.. Anyway, I like more "self destruction"... It doesn't have to be considered as a "physical destruction" I think, but rather as a sociological state... (-->a human fall)
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 8日 19:41
	cahe चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 2	Mozna by to przetÅ‚umaczyÄ‡ z innym kontekstem ale ogÃ³lnie jest ok
		2009年 नोभेम्बर 8日 19:46
	Aneta B. चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4487	Z jakim kontekstem, cahe? Nie rozumiem Twojej uwagi...

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