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Wstrzymując pęd ku zatracie ...
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Podnet od Aneta B.
Izvorni jezik: Poljski

Wstrzymując pęd ku zatracie

Jak to będzie Panie
gdy ma miłość się trochę zmieni
gdy będę już tylko wspominać
dni upojne w geście i słowie
podświadome czekanie na esemesy
o siódmej nad ranem
i te o drugiej przed snem
- krótkim lecz obowiązkowym
gdy miłosne obrazy zastygną już w wierszach
a serce zacznie w końcu słuchać
i zatrzyma się mój ślepy pęd ku zatracie?
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British English

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Holding the rush toward self destruction
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Engleski

Preveo AleksanderS
Željeni jezik: Engleski

Holding the rush toward self destruction

How is this going to be, Lord
when my love changes a bit?
when all I do will be to remember
the ecstatic days in gesture and words?
subconscious waiting for SMSes
at seven in the morning
and those at two before falling into sleep
- a short yet obligatory one
when love images have eventually set in poems?
when my heart finally starts listening
and my blind rush to self destruction is over?
Poslednja provera i obrada od lilian canale - 9 Novembar 2009 20:28





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6 Novembar 2009 23:59

AleksanderS
Broj poruka: 17
I mean here "a lack of control over the love and desires..."

Well, it seems that "annihilation" is totally wrong. I've not found a satisfactory replacement so far, temporary candidates being:
- lose control
- lose my mind
- lose my senses
Let's sleep with this problem, maybe tomorrow we'll solve it.

7 Novembar 2009 00:13

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Hehehe I count rather on English expert's help here... I think she will know it better...

7 Novembar 2009 01:48

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
Let's see...if I got your posts right I'd suggest:

SMS-es ---> SMSes
set in poems ---> crystallized in poems
annihilation ---> emotional chaos?


What do you say?

7 Novembar 2009 15:47

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
disarray?? Hm...
emotional chaos? Hm...

I'm not sure...

But I like very much the rest of your suggestions, Lilly.

7 Novembar 2009 15:56

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Is this possible that English has no any equivalent for Polish noun "zatrata", "zatracenie siÄ™"??

It means emotional state when people love so much that they become blind, chaotic, difficult to communicate, crazy, sometimes even irresponsible and unpredictable in their today actions... The are totally in love...

7 Novembar 2009 16:02

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
I found in my dictionary only a verb "zatracić" --> lose f.e. He seems to have lost all sens of time...
Here I mean that I was near to lose myself...

But here we need a noun from the verb... That is why I suggested "losseness" before...but probably it wasn't good one...

7 Novembar 2009 16:06

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
"doom"?

7 Novembar 2009 16:11

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
You are very close, Lilly, but this is not exactly the word yet...

being lost/sink/plunged in[to] love --> ....?

7 Novembar 2009 16:34

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
OMG!
self destruction?
desperation?


Kafetzou? Do you have any ideas?

CC: kafetzou

7 Novembar 2009 16:51

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
O my God! hehe!

destruction is the closest word for now...

"rush for a destruction..." - it sounds quite good,
but it should be more with love connotation...

7 Novembar 2009 18:07

kafetzou
Broj poruka: 7963
infatuation?

love sickness?

obsession?


7 Novembar 2009 18:34

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Thank you Laura!
Yes, sth between... Probably English language has no the exact equivalent...

The one which I like the most from all the propositions and seems to be the most suitaible is "obsession"...

"Rush for an obsession" - is it correct?

7 Novembar 2009 19:16

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Oh!
"self destruction" is also very good...

rush/rushing to self distruction - maybe even better...

8 Novembar 2009 15:15

iluvmilka
Broj poruka: 77
can i just have one suggestion?
in Britian we never say SMS but we use a word "text" it means the same thing but is more common and understandable

8 Novembar 2009 16:49

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Yes, indeed! When I was staying in England, they didn't use "SMS" at all... They said rather: "I'll send you a text" (or: text message)...only this way...

Thank you, Ania!

8 Novembar 2009 16:55

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Moreover: There is a lack of the title in the translation.

8 Novembar 2009 18:30

AleksanderS
Broj poruka: 17
IMHO, self-destruction is too "physical". What about "self-confusion"?

8 Novembar 2009 18:39

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Hm... I don't know.. Anyway, I like more "self destruction"...

It doesn't have to be considered as a "physical destruction" I think, but rather as a sociological state... (-->a human fall)

8 Novembar 2009 19:41

cahe
Broj poruka: 2
Mozna by to przetłumaczyć z innym kontekstem ale ogólnie jest ok

8 Novembar 2009 19:46

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
Z jakim kontekstem, cahe? Nie rozumiem Twojej uwagi...
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