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16सरुको हरफ - अंग्रेजी - Agnes Obel / Riverside

अहिलेको अवस्थासरुको हरफ
यो हरफ निम्न भाषामा उपलब्ध छ: अंग्रेजीफ्रान्सेलीस्पेनी

Category Song - Love / Friendship

शीर्षक
Agnes Obel / Riverside
अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने हरफ
RedShadowद्वारा बुझाइएको
स्रोत भाषा: अंग्रेजी

Down by the river by the boats
Where everybody goes to be alone
Where you won’t see any rising sun
Down to the river we will run

When by the water we drink to the dregs
Look at the stones on the riverbed
I can tell from your eyes
You've never been by the Riverside

Down by the water the riverbed
Somebody calls you somebody says
swim with the current and float away
Down by the river everyday

Oh my God I see how everything is torn in the river deep
And I don't know why I go the way
Down by the Riverside

When that old river runs past your eyes
To wash off the dirt on the Riverside
Go to the water so very near
The river will be your eyes and ears

I walk to the borders on my own
To fall in the water just like a stone
Chilled to the marrow in them bones
Why do I go here all alone

Down by the Riverside
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी
You can listen to the song over there:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dd-wAkXh_GY

But... the translations have to:
1) Convey the same emotions as the original
2) Rhyme as much as possible
3) Have the same amount of syllable as possible

In other words, the text's integrity is not paramount here; it's more about writing something that could be sing over the real song without sounding weird.

xD
Edited by lilian canale - 2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 10:17





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2011年 डिसेम्बर 21日 18:07

lilian canale
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972
Hi Redshadow,

I suggest a "high quality" request if you really want this text to be translated using rhyme, metric, etc.

2011年 डिसेम्बर 22日 21:09

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12396
Chilled to the marrow in them bones


CC: lilian canale

2011年 डिसेम्बर 22日 23:45

lilian canale
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972
Yeah, I know it looks weird, but all the versions of the lyrics show 'them'.

Perhaps Laura could help or explain...

CC: kafetzou

2011年 डिसेम्बर 22日 23:49

kafetzou
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 7963
"them bones" is slang for "those bones of mine". There's a famous song that goes, "Dem bones dem bones gonna walk around" etc.

However, I think there is another section with errors, which I've bolded below:

"Oh my God I see how everything is torn in the river deep
And I don't know why I go the way
Down by the Riverside

When that old river runs pass your eyes

2011年 डिसेम्बर 22日 23:59

kafetzou
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 7963
Actually, I listened to the song, and I really don't hear "boats" at all, but all of the sources seem to agree on this, and on the rest of it, except that "pass" should be "past", as I thought.

She is not a native speaker of English (she's Danish), so maybe that's why.

2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 10:18

lilian canale
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972
Thank you, Laura.

I've edited "pass ---> past"

2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 12:09

RedShadow
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 143
Hello,

Yes I thought that "them bones" was like an idiom of some kind.
Like some kinda Texan speaking weird american english . I was wondering if it were some slang too.

And yes now that you mention it, pass->past is way better.

Thank you all.

@lilian canale
How do I request a "high quality" translation?
Is there a button somewhere that I'm not aware of ?

2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 14:27

lilian canale
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972
Click on the Spanish flag of the "requested translations" at the top of this page, then on "Edit" and at the bottom of the page you'll see a box "High quality required". Check the box and send.

2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 14:48

RedShadow
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 143
Hey lilian canale,

I must be blind or something. I click on the spanish flag, that takes me to the "English-Spanish - Agnes Obel / Riverside" page.

However there is not any "Edit" stuff at the bottom.
(I even searched the page source code, and there is nothing)

Edit: okay I found someting "Request a new target language" then I check "High quality required" and select "All the languages of your last submitted translation", and finally click the bottom arrow.
But nothing seems to happen. Someting is written on top of the new page that says:
"New language - Agnes Obel / Riverside
Problem - Target language"

Well, ....

2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 14:53

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12396
Yeah, it's probably because this "high quality" option is only available when submitting the request for the first time, and not from the "Request another target language from this text". I'll try another way : I'll remove the request into Spanish then submit it myself.
Let's see...

2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 14:56

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12396
It works! maybe didn't you see the box that was to be checked, it was just under the text (bottom left)

2011年 डिसेम्बर 23日 15:38

RedShadow
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 143
Well thank you then.
To be honest, it's not a very, you know, "user friendly" interface

2011年 डिसेम्बर 24日 00:03

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12396
It has its charms! And you still can find friendly users here!

Well, if I'm not connected tomorrow eve ning nothing abnormal, I wish you a Merry Xmas!