Translation - French-Esperanto - Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes

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Title	Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes
Text Submitted by Tantine	Source language: French Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes Et le fond de lâ€™air est frais Lâ€™Astre scintille dans la neige en face Le gel, doucement, disparaÃ®t. Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes Et les vents apportent des pluies Lâ€™Astre scintille, au petit matin, Sur les rigueurs de la nuit. Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes Mais leurs feuilles sortent de la terre Les herbes sâ€™Ã©veillent, les tiges sâ€™allongent Le sol devient plus vert. Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes Mais le roncier bourgeonne Les crocus sortent, les oiseaux chantent Les journÃ©es sont plus longues Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes Mais la promesse contenue Dans chacun de Ses autres signes Est Â« Lâ€™Hiver est dÃ©chu Â» Il nâ€™y a pas encore de violettes Mais tressons la couronne Pour accueillir la princesse verte La DÃ©esse du Printemps Ruth Kilgallon-Thierry 1Â° March 2006
Remarks about the translation	J'aimerais que les traductions riment de la mÃªme maniÃ¨re. La licence poÃ©tique est tolÃ©rÃ©e dans le mesure oÃ¹ certaines plantes ne sont pas prÃ©sentes dans certains pays.

Title

La Diino de la Printempo

Translation

Esperanto

Translated by

goncin

Target language: Esperanto

AnkoraÅ ne ekaperis violoj.
Kaj estas freÅeco en la aero,
La Astro brilas supre super la neÄo,
Glacio forpereas eron post ero.

AnkoraÅ ne ekaperis violoj.
Kaj pluvojn alportas la vento
La Astro briletas, ekmatene,
Super la nokto, en silento.

AnkoraÅ ne ekaperis violoj.
Sed iliaj folioj eliras el profundo
Herboj altiÄas, tigoj lonÄiÄas
Dum pli verda fariÄas grundo.

AnkoraÅ ne ekaperis violoj.
Sed dornarbeto Äermas kiel sagoj,
Krokusoj ekkreskas, birdoj kantas
Tra longaj horoj etendiÄas tagoj.

AnkoraÅ ne ekaperis violoj.
Sed la enhavita promeso
En Ä‰iuj el iliaj signoj
Estas â€œvintron ni metos en Ä‰esoâ€.

AnkoraÅ ne ekaperis violoj.
Sed plektu ni kronon por princino
Por Åin saluti en Åia verdeco,
De la Printempo la Diino.

Ruth Kilgallon-Thierry
1a. marto 2006

Validated by goncin - 3 April 2008 14:20

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		2 April 2008 12:38
	goncin จำนวนข้อความ: 3706	Tantine, Very nice poem! I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed translating it (into both Brazilian Portuguese and Esperanto). In order to the Esperanto version to rhyme properly, I'd to do some small changes in the meaning ["poetical license"], so a rough and litteral translation from Esperanto version into English would read as follows: Yet didnâ€™t arise the violets. And there is freshness in the air, The Star shines in the height above the snow, The ice disappears piece by piece. Yet didnâ€™t arise the violets. And rains are brought by the wind The Star flickers at down, Above the night, in silence. Yet didnâ€™t arise the violets. But their leaves go out from depth, Bushes rise, stems lengthen While greener becomes the ground. Yet didnâ€™t arise the violets. But bramble germinates like arrows, Crocuses start to grow, birds sing Through long hours extend days. Yet didnâ€™t arise the violets. But the contained promise In each of theirs signs Is: â€œto winter weâ€™ll put a stopâ€. Yet didnâ€™t arise the violets. But braid us a crown for a princess For welcoming her in her greenness, Of the Spring the Goddess. Is it OK for you?
		1 April 2008 00:20
	Tantine จำนวนข้อความ: 2747	Wonderful You understood it exactly. I'm glad you enjoyed translating it. And I'm glad you liked it too. Bises Tantine