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bu Ã¼niversitede okumayÄ± istememin nedeni verdiÄŸi...

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bu Ã¼niversitede okumayÄ± istememin nedeni verdiÄŸi iyi eÄŸitim ve Ã¶ÄŸretmenleriydi.MimarlÄ±k sÄ±navÄ±na girmeden Ã¶nce okul hakkÄ±ndada araÅŸtÄ±rma yapmÄ±ÅŸtÄ±m. Zaten bu Ã¼niversitede okuyan arkadaÅŸlarÄ±mdanda aldÄ±ÄŸÄ±m bilgiler vardÄ±.KÄ±sacasÄ± hedefime ulaÅŸmak iÃ§in bana yardÄ±mcÄ± olacaÄŸÄ±na inanÄ±yorum.Kendimede bu konuda gÃ¼veniyorum.

Title	The reason why I want to study in this university
Dịch English Translated by cheesecake	Target language: English The reasons that made me want to study in this university were the good education it offers and its professors. I had done some research on the university before I took the architecture examination. Besides, I've already had information from my friends who studied in this university. Shortly, I believe it will help me reach my goal. I am sure of myself regarding this matter.
Remarks about the translation	There is an ambiguity in the last sentence; what will be helpful to her is not obvious ( it might be a person, studying in a university, the information that she gets etc.) but most probably it should be "studying in a university" and I translate it accordingly.

Validated by lilian canale

- 24 Tháng 10 2009 20:09

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	Tác giả	Bài gửi
		20 Tháng 10 2009 01:32
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	Please cheesecake have a closer look to this text, I'm sure you will find some improvements to make
		22 Tháng 10 2009 23:47
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	Thanks lilian I have edit some parts, I hope it seems better now
		23 Tháng 10 2009 00:00
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	I'd still suggest some changes: The reasons that made me want to study in this university were the good education (-) it offers and its professors. I had done some research on the university before I took the architecture examination. Besides, I've had/gotten information (-) from some of my friends (some friends of mine) who (have ? ) studied in this university. Shortly, I believe (-) it will help me (-) reach my goal. I am certain about that. Tell me if it conveys the meaning
		23 Tháng 10 2009 00:11
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	Thank you it seems great Only the last sentence actually tells that "I have self confidence (about the matter)/ I am sure of myself" because "I am certain about that" might change the meaning a little bit. Is my suggestion wrong with English?
		23 Tháng 10 2009 00:29
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	You may choose between "I've had" and "I've gotten" the friends ---> some friends (or simply "friends" ) I am sure of myself about the matter Either you are sure of yourself or you are sure about the matter Another option would be: "I am sure of myself regarding this matter"
		23 Tháng 10 2009 00:58
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	I guess it seems OK now, lilian
		23 Tháng 10 2009 18:30
	merdogan Tổng số bài gửi: 3769	made me or did me ? ....some research on the university...> some reconnoitre on this university
		23 Tháng 10 2009 18:38
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	made me reconnoitre not very usual and used in a military sense: reconnoitre the enemy's position in a war. It doesn't fit here, merdogan. Thanks anyway.
		24 Tháng 10 2009 20:02
	silkworm16 Tổng số bài gửi: 172	hello just a tiny suggestion of adding a single word: "already" to mean "zaten" Besides, I've alredy had information from my friends who studied in this university....