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Jei aÅ¡ Å¡okÄiau pro langÄ… - Tai tik lapkriÄio...

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Source language: Lithuanian

Jei aÅ¡ Å¡okÄiau pro langÄ… -
Tai tik lapkriÄio mÄ—nesÄ¯,
Kai Å¡aligatvis klotas
NukraujuojanÄiais lapais.
Ä® mane paÅ¾iÅ«rÄ—ti subÄ—gtÅ³
Kiemo vaikai.
AÅ¡ Å¡ypsoÄiausi jiems,
AÅ¡ Å¡ypsoÄiausi jiems dar ilgai.

AÅ¡ sakyÄiau:
- VaikuÄiai, nebijokite nieko:
Nei mirties, nei mokyklos, nei
blogÅ³ paÅ¾ymiÅ³.
AÅ¡ sakyÄiau:
- VaikuÄiai, kad tik jÅ«s Å¾inotumÄ—t,
Kaip visa tai nesvarbu,
Nesvarbu...
Nesvarbu...

Title	If I jumped out of the window...
Dịch English Translated by Dzuljeta	Target language: English If I jumped out of the window - I would only do that in November, When the pavement is blanketed with Bleeding leaves. Children from the yard Would run to look at me. I would smile at them, I would keep still, smiling at them for a long time. I would say: - Children, be afraid of nothing: Neither of death, nor of school, nor of bad grades. I would say: - Children, if only you knew How insignificant it all is... Insignificant... Insignificant...
Remarks about the translation	Note by the translator: Don't freak out, it is but a song (by Alina Orlova). This "if only you knew" could as well be understood as "I wish you knew".

Validated by lilian canale

- 5 Tháng 10 2009 21:43

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		2 Tháng 10 2009 13:57
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	Hi Dzuljeta, What about using "insignificant"? How insignificant all is... Insignificant... Insignificant... Also, there's a typo in "November" and I would say just "in November" I would keep still, smiling at them for a long time.
		3 Tháng 10 2009 09:36
	Dzuljeta Tổng số bài gửi: 45	Hi Lilian, Thanks I think you're right, "insignificant" sounds much better As for "in November" - yes, but I tried to make it sound more poetic. I guess my attempt failed

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