Translation - Turski-Engleski - Seni sevgini kaybettikten sonra Bende fazla bir...

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Title	Seni sevgini kaybettikten sonra Bende fazla bir...
Text Submitted by Francky5591	Source language: Turski Seni sevgini kaybettikten sonra Bende fazla bir ÅŸeyler deÄŸiÅŸmedi Yine sana aÅŸkÄ±na yazÄ±yorum AklÄ±mda deli gibi dÃ¼ÅŸÃ¼nceler Seni dÃ¼ÅŸÃ¼nÃ¼p aÄŸlÄ±yorum. DeÄŸiÅŸiklik yok eskisi gibiyim BakÄ±ÅŸlarÄ±m korkulu karamsar Ã¼rkek GÃ¶zlerim Ã§oktandÄ±r gÃ¼lmeye kÃ¼skÃ¼n YaÅŸamak tat vermiyor aÄŸlÄ±yorum Ã‡iÃ§ekleri yolup atÄ±yorum bir bir Åžimdi Ã¶nÃ¼mde karanlÄ±k bir mezar Usanmadan bÄ±kmadan kazÄ±yorum.
Remarks about the translation	portugues do brasil

Title

Since losing you and your love

Translation

Engleski

Translated by

kafetzou

Target language: Engleski

Since losing you and your love
Not much has changed with me
I still write to you and your love
With crazy thoughts in my head
I think of you and cry.

There's no change, I'm like I used to be
My gaze is fearful, dark, and timid
My eyes have been offended by laughing for a long time
Living is devoid of pleasure, I cry
I pick the flowers and and throw them away one by one
Now there is a dark grave in front of me
I'm digging it without getting bored or tired of it.

Validated by lilian canale

- 25 April 2009 17:15

Last messages

	Author	Message
		24 April 2009 20:27
	handyy Number of messages: 2118	Great translation Laura, but I think these parts need to be edited: 1) BakÄ±ÅŸlarÄ±m korkulu karamsar Ã¼rkek --> My glances are fearful, pessimistic/dark, timid 2) GÃ¶zlerim Ã§oktandÄ±r gÃ¼lmeye kÃ¼skÃ¼n --> My eyes've been offended by/resentful to laughing since a long time (refuse: "reddetmek" not "kÃ¼smek" ) 3) YaÅŸamak tat vermiyor --> Life is no longer pleasurable (It lost its charm and doesn't give any pleasure.)
		24 April 2009 20:54
	kafetzou Number of messages: 7963	Do you think it's OK now, Handyy?
		24 April 2009 21:01
	handyy Number of messages: 2118	Yep, everything is OK now (except from "my gaze": in the Turkish text it says "bakÄ±ÅŸlarÄ±m", so it is better to put it in plural form, I think.)
		24 April 2009 21:36
	kafetzou Number of messages: 7963	That doesn't really work in English. I've never heard of "gazes".
		24 April 2009 21:39
	handyy Number of messages: 2118	What about "glances" ?
		24 April 2009 21:44
	kafetzou Number of messages: 7963	A "glance" is when you look at something briefly, as in "to glance over a report". There is no really good translation for "bakÄ±ÅŸ" - we have the same problem in Greek, as there's a word (Î²Î»ÎÎ¼Î¼Î±) that means the exact same thing, and often turns up in poems and songs, but there's no English equivalent.
		24 April 2009 21:54
	handyy Number of messages: 2118	OK, I got it! Thanks for your explanation - now I can change my vote.