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Category Essay | デビットã¸ã®æ°—æŒã¡ | | Source language: Japanese
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| | TranslationEnglish Translated by cjcjmkx7 | Target language: English
I'm afraid of making David angry, so I can't phone too much, but he's really nice and I feel good when I'm near him, so I really like him.
| Remarks about the translation | ã‚‚ã—ã€ãƒ‡ãƒ“ッドã«æ›¸ã„ã¦ã„ã‚Œã°ã€ã€Œyou〠2) I'm afraid of offending you, so I can't phone too much, but you are really nice and I feel good when I'm near you, so I really like you.
下手ãªãƒã‚·ã‚¢èªžã§(「彼ã€ã®ç‰ˆ): 1) БоюÑÑŒ обидеть Давида, поÑтому Ñ Ð½Ðµ могу телефон Ñлишком много, но он очень приÑтно и Ñ Ñ‡ÑƒÐ²Ñтвую ÑÐµÐ±Ñ Ñпокойно, когда Ñ Ñ€Ñдом Ñ Ð½Ð¸Ð¼, так что Ñ ÐµÐ³Ð¾ очень люблю.
2) (youã®ç‰ˆ) БоюÑÑŒ обидеть тебÑ, поÑтому Ñ Ð½Ðµ могу телефон Ñлишком много, но Ñ‚Ñ‹ очень приÑтно и Ñ Ñ‡ÑƒÐ²Ñтвую ÑÐµÐ±Ñ Ñпокойно, когда Ñ Ñ€Ñдом Ñ Ñ‚Ð¾Ð±Ð¾Ð¹, поÑтому Ñ Ñ‚ÐµÐ±Ñ Ð¾Ñ‡ÐµÐ½ÑŒ люблю. |
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Last messages | | | | | 8 February 2010 16:11 | | | This translation is okay, but it could have been made much closer to the original:
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Because when you get angry you scare me, I can't phone you very often, but you're really kind, and I really like you because when I'm by your side I can relax.
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Anyway, I'm going to have to change the "offending you" to "making you angry," ("bothering you" ) because "offending" means something different ("insulting," which is not what her repeated phone calls do to him) | | | 8 February 2010 16:12 | | | Original translation before editing:
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I'm afraid of offending David, so I can't phone too much, but he's really nice and I feel good when I'm near him, so I really like him. |
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