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SÃ¶yleyÄ±n

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hamza778

Мова оригіналу: Турецька

Bu arala Ã§ok yorgunum
Hep Ä±syankar hep musuzum
AlnÄ±m dakÄ± kara yazÄ±
EÃ§el gÄ±bÄ± sÄ±lÄ±nmÄ±yor
IÃ§Ä±mdekÄ± kurÅŸun deÄŸÄ±l
AÅŸk yarasÄ± kapanmÄ±yor
SÃ¶yleyÄ±n bÄ±r daha anmasÄ±n benÄ±m adÄ±mÄ±
SÃ¶yleyÄ±n daha unutmadÄ±m yalanlarÄ±nÄ±
SÃ¶yleyÄ±n mahÅŸere sakladÄ±m gÃ¼nahlarÄ±nÄ±
SÃ¶yleyÄ±n bÄ±lsÄ±n SÃ¶yleyÄ±n bÄ±lsÄ±n

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Tell him

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handyy

Мова, якою перекладати: Англійська

Nowadays I'm so tired
I'm always rebellious and distressed
That miserable fate written on my forehead
is like death; it would not fade
The thing inside me is not a bullet
The wound of love doesn't heal
Tell him not to mention my name anymore
Tell him that I haven't forgotten his lies yet
Tell him that I'll keep his sins until the last judgement
Tell him to know that, tell him to know that

Затверджено lilian canale

- 9 Серпня 2008 14:34

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	Автор	Повідомлення
		8 Серпня 2008 01:00
	lilian canale Кількість повідомлень: 14972	Hi handyy, good work! I'd just suggest some changes to avoid repeating words. "I'm always rebellious and distressed that miserable fate written on my forehead is like death; it would not fade "anymore" (one word) "Tell him that I've hidden his sins for the last judgement " I wonder if by "hidden" you mean "saved" All the rest is OK for me.
		8 Серпня 2008 14:08
	handyy Кількість повідомлень: 2118	Hi Lilian, Your offers makes it more poetic, thanks a lot I'm gonna change them. -- "Tell him that I've hidden his sins for the last judgement "--> here she wants to say that I won't take revenge from you, I will keep your sins in my mind/heart till the last day, so God will judge you not me. (oh my, I felt myself like a story teller. this translations make my imaginative power become richer day by day )
		8 Серпня 2008 12:36
	lilian canale Кількість повідомлень: 14972	In that case perhaps it could read: "Tell him I'll keep his sins until the Final Judgment" And the last line sounds weird. It seems that we need an object after "know". Tell him to know (sth). What about changing it to: Let him know that (it)
		8 Серпня 2008 17:51
	merdogan Кількість повідомлень: 3769	it is "she".