Переклад - Російська-Англійська - Medali

Hi jita

I am trying to make sure the English is correct; once that is done, I will set a poll to ask others whether the translation is right, because I don't understand Russian.

I have a few questions about your translation:

- It was unknown really life -> this is not a correct English sentence, and I am not quite sure what you mean:
'real life was unknown' or 'life was not really known'

- We have found our love
Or we've missed a point -> is this a statement or a question? (at the moment it is a statement, I am just checking if that is what you mean.)

- I won't let to change
My pain to another pain -> do you mean 'I won't let my pain change (in)to another (type of) pain'?

- This field
can not reap a yield -> do you mean 'cannot yield a harvest'?

- Anything should be about to say
To understand my pain -> do you mean 'anything should be about explaining, about understanding my pain'?

Please let me know what you think about my suggestions or make other suggestions if you like

Once the English text is correct, I can start the poll.
Thanks!

Hello experts

The translator has not logged in for a while. Could you help me with the questions above? Thanks!

CC: ramarren Siberia

The translation is OK, but not very good... We have already discussed this song. Can't we see the previous discussion?

For example, "It was unknown really life" in original means "We did not know this [side of the coin]", not very close, yeah?

As for "is this a statement or a question?" I may suppose that your question is quite senseless, because in poetry often there is no any definite border between them, as well as punctuation marks are omitted. That gives the opportunity to find your own sense

Thanks ramarren

It seems in Russian this phrase can be a statement as well as a question, so I will leave it a statement in the translation (in English, this is clear from the word order:
we've missed a point: statement
have we missed a point: question

I have looked for the discussion, but when the previous translation was rejected, the discussion was no longer available for me to see

I will also set a poll to see if anyone else has any suggestions, even though the English is not perfect yet.

Lein

Actually, I would advice to reject this translation as well, In fact, the previous was far better, I do not know why it was rejected, it just needed some improvements...

Done, thanks

It's obviously not the easiest text to translate...