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Translation - Spanish-English - Que todos mis enemigos estén lejos ...
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Category
Sentence - Culture
Title
Que todos mis enemigos estén lejos ...
Text
Submitted by
Francky5591
Source language: Spanish
Que todos mis enemigos estén lejos de mÃ.
Si adquiero riqueza, será mÃa para siempre,
mi belleza será la de Apsara.
Podré ir adonde quiera y muchos me atenderán,
servirán y protegerán, rodeándome en todas partes.
Title
Apsara's beauty
Translation
English
Translated by
lilian canale
Target language: English
May all my enemies stay far from me.
If I get riches, they will be mine forever.
My beauty will be like Apsara's.
I will go wherever I want and many will serve me
and protect me, surrounding me completely.
Remarks about the translation
far/away
many (people) will serve me
Validated by
Francky5591
- 4 November 2010 23:46
Last messages
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4 November 2010 10:24
lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi Francky,
This same text was already translated
here
in second person instead of first.
4 November 2010 10:55
Francky5591
Number of messages: 12396
The beginning is slightly different( "Que todos mis enemigos estén lejos de mÃ."/"Permite que os teus inimigos estejam longe de..." ) We can translate it IMO!
Two different requesters moreover.
I know you're afraid it to land onto our monkey-wrench corner one of these days, about this point I was wondering : Even if texts are quite similar, slight details may let the translation still be needed by possible requesters who completely ignore the target-language. This is true with texts one's planning to punctually send friends or family with different pronoun-subjects used in similar texts such as "I wish you.../we wish you...". When one's completely ignoring the target-language how could one base oneself on one version at 1st person singular and conjugate the verb at eg : first person plural? Same here with 1st/2nd person singular, ok, in English the only difference stands with the pronouns that are used, but what about the other aimed target-languages, here Arabic and Nepali?
4 November 2010 12:48
lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Actually, there are some differences. I'll do it.
4 November 2010 16:01
empirevasquez
Number of messages: 3
it is better to say: "away from me" and "many people will serve me"