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翻译 - 冰岛语-英语 - Sjáum yfir rá Sjóinn skerum frá Við siglum mastri...当前状态 翻译
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讨论区 杂文  本翻译"仅需意译"。 | Sjáum yfir rá Sjóinn skerum frá Við siglum mastri... | | 源语言: 冰岛语
Sjáum yfir rá
Sjóinn skerum frá
Við siglum mastri trú
Seglum þöndum
Við stýrum að à brú
Við siglum à land
à stórgrýti og sand
Við vöðum à land
Ófremdarástand
Já, anskotann
Feginn fann ég þar
Þökkum ákaflega
à skjóli neyðarhúss
Og við sváfum
Stórviðri ofsaði út |
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| We are looking over the rudder | | 目的语言: 英语
Looking over the rudder
Cut off from the sea
We are sailing by the mast
Stretching the Sails
We are heading towards the jetty
We are running aground
Up on the large rocks and the sand
We wade ashore
What a mess
Damn it, yea...
And there I found myself
Endless grateful
Sheltered in a makeshift house
And we slept
As the storm abated |
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2008年 十月 28日 23:33 | | | | | |
2008年 十月 29日 07:53 | | | Tack Bamsa, den versionen är nog bättre!  | | |
2008年 十一月 11日 03:38 | | | We look over the rudder
Cut off the sea
We sail by the mast
Stretch the sails
We steer towards the bridge
We sail ashore
Up on the large rocks and the sand
We wade ashore
What a mess
Fuckin’ yeah!
There I found myself
Endlessly thanking
Sheltered in a makeshift house
And we slept
As the storm died down
Pia, this is a hard translation and you've done a great work, however there are some differences in meaning for the vocabulary used in each version that we must make clear.
For example: Is it a bridge or a jetty?
sail ashore or running aground?
large rocks or big cliffs?
temporary or makeshift house?
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2008年 十一月 11日 09:54 | | | Hello Lilian
brú - bridge
stórgrýti - large rock
siglum à land - sailing to land
neyðarhúss - I don't understand the difference between temporary and makeshift house, isn't both about a temporary accommodation?
I think I missunderstood a lot, the one Bamsa found is better. Can I use it?
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2008年 十一月 11日 10:39 | | | Well Pia, I don't know Icelandic, you'll have to decide about the correct words to use. I don't think you misunderstood anything, but there are a few thing that in the other version sound better. Also some words sound better in yours.
The only "corrections" would be:
Some continuous tenses into simple
endless ---> endlessly
Bamsa, could you help us define the vocabulary?
CC: Bamsa | | |
2008年 十一月 13日 12:56 | | | | | |
2008年 十一月 14日 00:59 | | | Ok. In my opinion there is "jetty" and not a "bridge", "running aground" and not "sail ashore", "large rocks" because it is about the rocks on a beach over which the people have to step and, finally, I would use "makeshift house" because I believe is more appropiate than temporary.
With other words: the poetry is about a boat that comes ashore looking for shelter against the storm. They step on the land over the rocks on the beach and the walk is difficult. And than they are grateful of finding a temporary shelter in a house.
A little bit difficult to find the right translation when there are lyrics to be translated. | | |
2008年 十一月 14日 01:38 | | | Thank you Bamsa 
Now Pia, what do you think? Will you edit anything? I don't even think we'll need a poll for it. | | |
2008年 十一月 14日 10:59 | | | I'm a REAL beginner on Icelandic ...so I trust Ernst a lot, thank you! I'll change to "large rocks" and "makeshift house" Lilian. |
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