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Kichwa	Oswojone drzewo ty widziaÅ‚eÅ› innych ludzi...
Nakala Tafsiri iliombwa na Aneta B.	Lugha ya kimaumbile: Kipolishi Oswojone drzewo ty widziaÅ‚eÅ› innych ludzi ty widziaÅ‚eÅ› inny Å›wiat twoje oczy miaÅ‚y inny kolor zakurzone od lat a ja oswojone drzewo nie wiedziaÅ‚am Å¼e moÅ¼e nie byÄ‡ zielono inaczej byÅ‚am uczona innym mlekiem karmiona inne kwiaty wÄ…chaÅ‚am twoich nie potrzebowaÅ‚am och, ograniczona! ty widzisz innych ludzi ty widzisz inny Å›wiat twoje oczy majÄ… inny kolor zakurzone od lat a ja mÅ‚ode drzewo uczÄ™ siÄ™ nowych kolorÃ³w siÄ™gam po czarne napoje i nie wÄ…cham juÅ¼ tamtych kwiatÃ³w a ja â€“ dzikie drzewo toczÄ™ nowe boje zaczynam siÄ™ siebie baÄ‡ i widzÄ™ swoich katÃ³w ja muszÄ™ tylko prosto staÄ‡
Maelezo kwa mfasiri	British English

Kichwa

The tame tree

Tafsiri

Kiingereza

Ilitafsiriwa na

AleksanderS

Lugha inayolengwa: Kiingereza

The tame tree

you saw different people
you saw a different world
your eyes had a different colour
in dust for years

but I, a tame tree,
didn't know
things could not be green

differently was I taught
different milk I drank
different flowers I smelled
yours did not need I
oh, how restrained was I

you see different people
you see a different world
your eyes have a different colour
in dust for years

and I, a young tree,
learn new colours
try black drinks
and I don't smell those flowers anymore

and I, a wild tree,
fight new battles
begin to fear of myself
and I can see my oppressors

I
only have to
stand
tall

Ilisahihishwa au kuhaririwa mwisho na lilian canale

- 2 Novemba 2009 12:30

Ujumbe wa hivi karibuni

	Mwandishi	Ujumbe
		31 Oktoba 2009 23:06
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	That wasn't "a" but "i" i nie wÄ…cham juÅ¼ tamtych kwiatÃ³w ... The context is clear I guess...
		31 Oktoba 2009 23:08
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Moreover: "your eyes had a different colour" (in a first verse)
		31 Oktoba 2009 23:13
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	"but I, a tame tree" --> it sounds a little weird. Don't you think? Maybe better would be: "but me being a tame tree" - I'm not sure of course... We need an English expert here...
		31 Oktoba 2009 23:18
	AleksanderS Idadi ya ujumbe: 17	"but me being a tame tree" - I'm not sure of course... We need an English expert here... This is one of the things that could only be assessed by a native English expert on poetry. To me it seems OK as it is, but I'm not an expert.
		31 Oktoba 2009 23:27
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	"But as/being a tame tree, I didn't know..." would be fine.
		31 Oktoba 2009 23:34
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Thank you, my dear Lilly! Tell me also, please, wheather Aleksander's version: but I, the tame tree, didn't know... is also correct... It is closer to the original in this case...
		1 Novemba 2009 00:01
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	One thing more--> the ending: only have to stand up stand up--> stand upright ? For the expert: it means "standing with a proud and dignity".
		1 Novemba 2009 11:30
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	Aneta, perhaps if we add "stoically" the line gets the sense you mean. only have to stand up stoically @ Aleksander, you don't have to state what corrections were done to the translation. That is something that through the messages posted under it, the expert who will evaluate the work will notice Now, I'm setting a poll for it and you won't be able to edit it anymore, OK? But don't worry. I think it's fine.
		1 Novemba 2009 18:11
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Oh, I don't think you understood me, Lilly. I didn't write the litteral meaning above, but metaphorical. Why "stand upright" is not good? It conveys precisely the Polish source. With other words: "stand with erect back"
		1 Novemba 2009 22:08
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	Since you said "standing with a proud and dignity", I thought it involved not only the erect position, but an impassive stance. But if you say "stand upright" is enough to get the meaning of the original, let it be
		1 Novemba 2009 22:20
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Yes! The further meaning should be created just in our mind. I wanted to give only a direction of our thinking... because I guess that it is natural that we will consider this "standing upright" as a human attitude full of proud and dignity...
		1 Novemba 2009 22:34
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	a ja oswojone drzewo --> but I, a tame tree (2nd verse) a ja mÅ‚ode drzewo --> and I, the tame tree (5th) I haven't noticed before, but the lines are the same in English, but not in Polish version! mÅ‚ode --> young (but I don't know whether this adjective can be connected with a tree...) Moreover, why first "tree" is followed by "a", and the next is with "the"??
		1 Novemba 2009 22:39
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Oh! I have got an idea! Maybe "mÅ‚ode drzewo"-->"unripe tree"?
		1 Novemba 2009 22:48
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	Edited! I hope it's fine now.
		1 Novemba 2009 22:58
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Thank you Lilly! Yes it is. I only wanted to ask about an order of the line: "yours did not need I" I understand it is a kind of syntactic inversion...or sth similar?
		1 Novemba 2009 22:58
	lilian canale Idadi ya ujumbe: 14972	Syntax is fine May I accept this one now?
		1 Novemba 2009 22:58
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487
		2 Novemba 2009 09:10
	AleksanderS Idadi ya ujumbe: 17	Re: stand up There is an idiom that fits better here: "stand tall", see e.g. at http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/standing+tall "to be brave and proud. I can still stand tall. I'm innocent. Our athletes stand tall in the knowledge that they did their best."
		2 Novemba 2009 11:57
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Wow! Thank you, Aleksander for your searchings! It was a great shot!
		2 Novemba 2009 12:03
	Aneta B. Idadi ya ujumbe: 4487	Lilly, could you edit if you agree the last proposition is better...? CC: lilian canale

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