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Traducció - Anglès-Xinès simplificat - Onward to the trees, citizens!Estat actual Traducció
| Onward to the trees, citizens! | | Idioma orígen: Anglès Traduït per guilon
Cement across the plains Flows into the mountains Poison in the fountains Through our countrysides
Out of tornadoes Our history is sinking Our ideal remains "To strut our stuff"
Buying air in blocks Filling the balance: Some petrodollars In exchange for existence
From the equator to the poles This weight on our transitory squatters' shoulders... It isn't funny anymore
Since we must change things Onward to the trees, citizens! It's time for us to propose A world for tomorrow!
Onward to the trees, citizens! Some slaps we are due The watch is for tomorrow Some slaps due in return
Making an army of reeds Stand firm No more people kneeling Pass the word
It's true that the Earth is round But who's to tell us That it is for everyone... And the ones to come...
No time left to know who's to blame to count the chances or the others Now we should fight With you I do believe | | Comment tu la trouves celle-ci, Francky? J'aime pas trop, je suppose qu'il vaut mieux la laisser à un anglophone. |
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Darrera validació o edició per humanlot - 20 Març 2007 07:28
Darrer missatge | | | | | 20 Març 2007 07:20 | | | A few mistaken interpretation..
1. "Flows into the mountains" is not 人群涌进了深山. We are talking about the cement, not people.
2. "To strut our stuff" meant to "show off". The original French text was "to make beautiful". It's about 炫耀, not åšæŒ
3. "Buying air in blocks" is not 在楼厦间è´ä¹°ç©ºæ°” . It means buying packaged air.
4. "Onward to the trees, citizens!" came from the French text "to the trees", which was a play on the French anthem "To the arms", which meant to "take up arms". So it does not mean marching into the forest. It means "embracing nature".
5. "Some slaps we are due; The watch is for tomorrow; Some slaps due in return " is not translated at all. I can accept you creating new verses, but can you explain "时钟以全新的明天为准"? I understand it to be "The clock used the new tomorrow as basis". Huh?
This is a complex translation. You have to look at the discussion that went on for the English text. | | | 13 Abril 2007 05:57 | | | thank you for discussion.
here is my understanding:
1. 人群将一些éžè‡ªç„¶çš„东西带入深山,"现代人硬塞给了自然"
2.上下文æ„æ€æ˜¯åŽ†ç»ç£¨éš¾,ä»ç„¶ä»¥æˆ‘们的东西为è£,ä»è¦åšæŒ.
3.工业化的社会,纯净的空气都æˆäº†å¥¢ä¾ˆå“."楼厦间è´ä¹°æ˜‚贵的呼å¸"
4.这个å¥ååº”è¯¥æ ¹æ®å…¸æ•…或者æ¥æºç¿»è¯‘.请指æ£.
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Poem translation always needs our complete understanding and careful transmission of the meaning into mother language. Personally I find theme of this one is encouragin, but the sentences are hard to organize. Just took a try. thanks for your comments. Any more suggestions are warmly welcomed. | | | 13 Abril 2007 06:40 | | | Hi greatguy, It is indeed a difficult piece. And I think you have done a good job of it. Though there are parts where I disagree.
Here is my attempt at interpreting "Some slaps we are due; The watch is for tomorrow; Some slaps due in return". I believe it means the past owe us something so we are justified to want to punish them(Some slaps we are due). And so "Some slaps due in return" would in turn mean that we owe our children something and we should be slapped for that.
This is such an interesting piece, I couldn't resist trying to translate it myself. As my Chinese is not as good as my English, I hope you can give me your comments about my attempt.
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| | | 13 Abril 2007 07:42 | | | By the way, if it can help, you can view the clip on the official website (clik on "Passer l'intro" and then on "Aux arbres citoyens" or a direct link on http://www.mcm.net/musique/player/27831/ | | | 13 Abril 2007 23:59 | | | |
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