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Titlu	ESKÄ°DEN ( Ã–ZDEMÄ°R ASAF)
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Titlu

In the past

Traducerea

Engleză

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Mesud2991

Limba ţintă: Engleză

...Of djinns and of fairies
There were grandmothers and grandfathers
They all were away from death at that time
They used to make us love them and fear them
Even their tragic story used to start joyously
They used to adorn our youth
They always used to remind us of good things
Of ages long gone by
Even sad songs used to start joyously
On the days when we were indifferent
We used to unavoidably burst with joy
Without us hearing and thinking
Everyone was away from death at that time
We had dearly beloved ones
They all were nice individually, never used to know us
On every road we crossed there were rose gardens...

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- 9 Mai 2013 14:26

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	Autor	Mesaj
		14 Aprilie 2013 16:25
	Mesud2991 Numărul mesajelor scrise: 1331	Full version of the poem: There were such nice people in the past They covered our childhood They used to tell us tales Of djinns and of fairies There were grandmothers and grandfathers They all were away from death at that time They used to make us happy and scared Even their tragic story used to start joyously It seems this is why they left stories There were such nice people in the past They used to adorn our youth They always used to remind us of good things Of ages long gone by They used to create love and hope Everything was away from death at that time Even sad songs used to start joyously On the days when we were indifferent We used to unavoidably burst with joy Those were the days There were such nice songs in the past They used to allow us to live in dreams They used to make us laugh and cry Without us hearing and thinking Every moment was like a century Everyone was away from death at that time We had dearly beloved ones They all were nice individually, never used to know us On every road we crossed there were rose gardens Those were the days
		14 Aprilie 2013 14:52
	lilian canale Numărul mesajelor scrise: 14972	Hi Mesud, It seems to me that what you posted as a translation does not convey what was requested. We must translate only the text requested even if it is just part of a longer one. Please remove from the translation field the parts that didin't appear in the request, OK?
		14 Aprilie 2013 16:08
	Mesud2991 Numărul mesajelor scrise: 1331	Hi Lilian, OK I will. But it may not make sense with the lines randomly written. So I will write the whole poem in the comment field.
		14 Aprilie 2013 16:28
	lilian canale Numărul mesajelor scrise: 14972	Some dots at the beginning and at the end may solve that
		23 Aprilie 2013 13:39
	lilian canale Numărul mesajelor scrise: 14972	Hi Turkish experts, It seems no user will vote on this translation. Could you please give a hand with the evaluation by giving your input on it? Thanks in advance. CC: Bilge Ertan minuet FIGEN KIRCI 44hazal44
		24 Aprilie 2013 09:31
	minuet Numărul mesajelor scrise: 298	Two minor suggestions: They used to make us happy and scared -> They used to make us to love them and to scare them. "gardens" is missing in the end, before the dots.
		24 Aprilie 2013 10:10
	Mesud2991 Numărul mesajelor scrise: 1331	Yes. I misread that line (sevdirmek - sevindirmek): They used to get us to love and make us scared
		24 Aprilie 2013 13:32
	lilian canale Numărul mesajelor scrise: 14972	Actually, that line sounds weird in English. Do you mean: "They used to frighten us and (also) make us love them."?
		25 Aprilie 2013 09:22
	Mesud2991 Numărul mesajelor scrise: 1331	There should be no object after love: They used to frighten us and (also) enable us to love