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Traduction - Anglais-Italien - Awaiting

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Catégorie Poésie - Amour / Amitié

Titre
Awaiting
Texte
Proposé par Aneta B.
Langue de départ: Anglais Traduit par iluvmilka

You kindle a bonfire in me
You leave...
It takes a long time to fade away ...
I don't want to help it
I don't want to look at the grey ash ...
I don't want to feel the emptiness and yearning
For what has been and might never come back

I don't want to give you everything
In order not to lose it
I don't want to tell you everything
It's not worth it ...

I want what you want -
Your presence and closeness
Your remembrance
Male passion
Your admiration ...
Commentaires pour la traduction
Edited: rememberance -> remembrance

Titre
L'attesa
Traduction
Italien

Traduit par alexfatt
Langue d'arrivée: Italien

Accendi un falò dentro me,
Te ne vai...
Ci vuole molto tempo perché si spenga...
Non voglio aiutarlo
Non voglio guardare la grigia cenere
Non voglio sentire vacuità e bramosia
Per ciò che è stato e che potrebbe non tornare più.

Non voglio darti tutto
Per non perderlo
Non voglio dirti tutto
Non ne vale la pena...

Io voglio ciò che vuoi tu -
La tua presenza, la tua vicinanza
Il tuo ricordo
La tua virile passione
La tua ammirazione...
Dernière édition ou validation par alexfatt - 30 Avril 2012 16:00





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20 Avril 2012 18:41

alexfatt
Nombre de messages: 1538
Hi Aneta

Just a question... "I don't want to help it" means "I don't want to help it to fade away" or "I don't want to help it by rekindling it"?


21 Avril 2012 00:31

Aneta B.
Nombre de messages: 4487
"I don't want to help it (to fade away)" = I wish the "sweet bonfire" could burn in me for ever!

Thanks for the translation, dear!
I love the rhyme at the end.
(There isn't any rhyme in my Polish version).

21 Avril 2012 20:14

alexfatt
Nombre de messages: 1538
You're welcome! The final rhyme was unexpected