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Hej Alexsandra!

Tack fÃ¶r ditt senaste brev.Jag tÃ¤nkte nu berÃ¤tta lite mer om mig sjÃ¤lv. Jag har tvÃ¥ syskon en bror och en syster.Min syster bor i Stochholm och min bror bor i Sundsvall.PÃ¥ min fritid tycker jag om att umgÃ¥s med vÃ¤nner,Ã¤ven att resa till andra lÃ¤nder.Tycker Ã¤ven om gÃ¥ och se en bra film pÃ¥ bio.Ã„r Ã¤ven intresserad av fiske.Vad gÃ¶r du helst pÃ¥ din fritid?Jag har ochsÃ¥ tvÃ¥ barn, som jag har varannan vecka.Axel som Ã¤r 7Ã¥r och Astrid som Ã¤r 4Ã¥r.

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Hello Alexsandra!

Thank you for your last letter. I thought I should tell you a little bit more about myself. I have two siblings, one brother and one sister. My sister lives in Stockholm and my brother lives in Sundsvall. I like to spend my spare time with friends and to take trips to other countries. I enjoy seeing a good movie at the cinema and I'm also interested in fishing. What do you like the most to do on your spare time? I have two children, living with me every other week. Axel who is 7 years old and Astrid who is 4.

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- 21 Decembro 2008 11:01

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		19 Decembro 2008 21:11
	lilian canale Nombro da afiŝoj: 14972	Hi Pia I've made some changes to avoid redundancy. The text is quite simple and uses too many "Ã¤ven". Tell me if you agree. Before edits: Thank you for your last letter. I thought I should tell you a little bit more about myself. I have two siblings, one brother and one sister. My sister lives in Stockholm and my brother lives in Sundsvall. I like to spend my spare time with friends, also to travel too other countries. I also like to watch a good movie on cinema. I'm also interested in fishing. What do you preferably do on your spare time? I also have two children, living with me every other week. Axel who is 7 years old and Astrid who is 4 years old.
		19 Decembro 2008 21:22
	pias Nombro da afiŝoj: 8113	Thank you Lilian The original is written that way ...that's why I wrote the same way, but you are right, there are too many "och" and "Ã¤ven" in the source. It looks very good, apart from that I think "I like to spend my spare time with friends and travel to other countries." sounds like he likes to travel with his friend. The source doesn't say that, I think it must be "I like to spend my spare time with friends and also to travel to other countries." "Vad gÃ¶r du helst" does not mean "What do you usually do", it's more about what he/she prefer to do.
		19 Decembro 2008 21:58
	lilian canale Nombro da afiŝoj: 14972	What about that?
		19 Decembro 2008 22:04
	pias Nombro da afiŝoj: 8113	Looking good! Thank you Lilian