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Kategorio Kanto - Amo / Amikeco  Ĉi tiu tradukpeto estas "nur por signifo". | | | Font-lingvo: Hispana
Llegas, se acabó una larga espera
Este invierno es primavera porque llegas
Y me abrigo en ti
Llegas cuando no creÃa en nada
Como luz de madrugada es cuando llegas
Y me refugio en ti
Y asà vas cubriendo el frÃo con amor
Vas haciéndome sentir mejor
Porque llegas encendiendo el corazón
Haces que mi alma sienta amor de nuevo
Haces que a tu lado ya no sienta miedo
Haces que me entregue con cada latido
Y que no quiera ni un segundo sin estar contigo | | Manau, kad Äia ispanų kalba. Ja kalbama mexikieÄių serialuose.
<reedición>:
-Pongo los acentos que faltaban ("frio", asi"...) y separo versos que estaban erróneamente unidos.
-Sustituyo "sufriendo" por "cubriendo" (que es la palabra correcta aquÃ). [Lev van Pelt] |
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You arrive, a long wait is finished
This winter becomes spring because you arrive
And I warm myself in you
You arrive when I disbelieved everything
Like the light of dawn you arrive
And I shelter in you
And so you cover the cold with love
You make me feel better
For you arrive kindling the heart
You cause my soul to feel love anew
At your side I’m not afraid anymore
You attain my surrender with each heartbeat
And I don't want a single second without you | | I've not intended to be literal in every verse, but faithful to their sense (and, when possible, to their breath and rhythm).
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Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de lilian canale - 24 Oktobro 2012 19:27
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23 Oktobro 2012 17:21 | | 
LeinNombro da afiŝoj: 3389 | I noticed a few things that I think could make this sound more natural, or slightly more accurate. Feel free to disregard my remarks if you think it disrupts the poetry 
- se acabó - is finished, not finishes
- I warm myself in you
- the light of dawn
- for you arrive kindling the heart
- you cause my soul to feel love anew | | |
24 Oktobro 2012 01:49 | | | Hi Lein!
I agree with several of your remarks, specially the second (to add "myself" and change the preposition, even if I would choose "with" instead of "in" ); the fourth ("for" sounds better than "since" ); and the last one (this "to" was actually missing).
With regard to the first verse, that second verb should strictly be in past tense, as you note, but I like it better in present; of course, I leave it for Lilian (and you) to decide.
Your third point is good as well, and "[the] light of dawn" –maybe without the article-- could be substituted for "dawning light". I leave this also to your criterion )
Many thanks for your interest and your help!
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