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Titolo	Nous pourrions danser dans un jardin de fleur...
Teksto Submetigx per gÃ©raldine	Font-lingvo: Franca Nous pourrions danser dans un jardin de fleurs J'aurais bien aimÃ© mais elles ont toutes fanÃ©es Ils suffirait de les ranimer Nous pourrions chanter tout notre espoir J'aurais bien voulu mais guide moi pour le trouver Entre dans mes songes et tu pourras le dÃ©couvrir Je pourrais mentir en disant que je pense Ã toi mais le mensonge est pÃ©chÃ© Je pourrais exaucer tes voeux mais ils me paraissent bien trop inaccessibles Je pourrais te dÃ©crocher la lune mais tu ne me donne pas la force pour l'attraper
Rimarkoj pri la traduko	Bonjour, j'aimerais que quelqu'un puisse traduire ce texte en anglais britannique. Merci d'avance :)

Titolo

We could dance in a flower garden

Traduko

Angla

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mbouquet

Cel-lingvo: Angla

We could dance in a flower garden
I would love to, but they're all wilted
We would just have to revive them
We could sing our hope
I would love to, but guide me to find it
Enter my dreams and you'll discover it
I could lie and say that I am thinking of you, but lying is a sin
I could grant your wishes, but they're far too unreachable
I could take the stars out of the sky for you, but you don't give me strength to do it

Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de lilian canale

- 15 Julio 2013 15:57

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	Aŭtoro	Afiŝo
		7 Julio 2013 14:47
	lilian canale Nombro da afiŝoj: 14972	Hi mbouquet, I don't think the last line conveys the meaning in the original. Could you please check it?
		7 Julio 2013 17:10
	gÃ©raldine Nombro da afiŝoj: 3	thank's for your reply, sorry i'm french i don't speak english very well. I want to sing in engish this is more beautiful than french. I have several text to translate. I can ask you for your help for the end of the translation of this text? And see others? If you want we can exchange by e-mail or Facebook?
		7 Julio 2013 17:55
	RedShadow Nombro da afiŝoj: 143	Hey, I agree that something feels off: climb. What about "but you don't give me strength to reach for them"?
		7 Julio 2013 22:14
	mbouquet Nombro da afiŝoj: 2	That's correct, "but you don't give me strength to reach for them" would be more appropriate than "climb".
		8 Julio 2013 13:32
	Francky5591 Nombro da afiŝoj: 12396	Salut GÃ©raldine Encore une version, sachant que nous sommes trois franÃ§ais We could dance in a flower garden I would love to, but they're all wilted We would just have to revive them We could sing all of our hope I would love to, but show me the way Come in my dreams so that you can see it I could lie and say that I am thinking of you, but lying is a sin I could grant your wishes, but they look so far away For you I could catch the moon but you don't give me the strength to do it