Hi sneh
A few edits, then we can evaluate your translation
"
How I wish
that today someone could ask the state of my broken heart.
The way destiny changes is fascinating,
it can even con a conman,
The branch broke w
hen a flower blossomed.
What I understood as love was
a misconception of my eyes,
It was no ones fault.
I asked for love and in return got separation,
I don't like this world any more,
On my first step towards love I was betrayed.
I always used to be single and so I never knew how destructive love was."
Let me know what you think
Bises
Tantine
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- 15 אפריל 2010 21:40
You left one more capitalization on 3rd line though. 
You're welcome. And I know. I am an insomniac myself. lol