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Translation - Turkish-English - merhaba canım önce nasılsın demekle başalamak...

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Title
merhaba canım önce nasılsın demekle başalamak...
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Submitted by 01sunset
Source language: Turkish

merhaba canım önce nasılsın demekle başalamak istiyorum.seninle tanıştığımız günden beri kendimden bazı şeyleri alı koyamadım,içimde farklı hisler ve duygular oluşturdun,kısaca beni kendine o mahsum ve etkileyici bakışların ve kişiliğinizi ortaya koyan sadeliğinizle beni kendinize bir tutsak haline getirdiniz,ve size aşık oldum,sizin beni anlaya bilmeniz için elimden geleni yapmaya çalıştım umarım beni anlayabilmişsinizdir....umarım sizin için göndermiş olduğum bu küçük hediyeyi kabul eder ve hatıra olarak saklarsınız....doğum günün kutlu olsun bebeğim...hayal gözlüm.

Title
hello dear
Translation
English

Translated by silkworm16
Target language: English

Hello dear, first I should ask “how are you?” Since the day we met, I haven’t been able to help doing certain things; you made me feel so different inside, in short you captivated me with the way you looked so innocent and enchanting and I’ve fallen in love with you. I tried to do my best to make you understand me; I hope you could…and I hope you will accept this little gift I sent to you and keep it as a souvenir… Happy birthday baby….My angel eyed beauty.
Remarks about the translation
"hisler ve duygular", synonymous words...
while translating I needed to change some parts in order to sound more fluent or natural...
Last validated or edited by lilian canale - 20 May 2008 05:07





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18 May 2008 07:44

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi silkworm,

The English looks great. I'd just make a few changes.

("you got me feeling so different inside" )
"you made me feel so different inside.."

("I haven’t been able to keep myself from doing certain things" )
"I haven’t been able to help doing certain things;" (I couldn't avoid doing them)

and at the end "...this little gift I sent to you ..."

What do you think?

17 May 2008 23:45

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
01 sunset,

You sent a pm to my inbox in Turkish. I'm sorry but I don't read Turkish. Could you please post in English how we can help you?

17 May 2008 23:57

01sunset
Number of messages: 7
I APOLOGIZE A LOT , sorry.thank you FOR YOUR HELPS .THE RESPECT ..01sunset...mustafa

18 May 2008 16:31

silkworm16
Number of messages: 172
hi lilian

thank you for your advice.
ok. I can edit the sentence as "I havent been able to help doing certain things"

about the other one , I was first going to write the same "you made me feel so different inside"
but then I wanted to write something more lyrical
okay I can edit it too, after all you are an expert here