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| | 26 July 2008 14:18 |
| |  Hi Madeleine,
I've edited the accent " ´ " into the apostrophe " ' " and "in thousands of pieces" into "in a thousand pieces".
But this line:
"it's snowing with tears on my heart" still sounds weird.
Could you explain that with different words?
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| | 25 July 2008 09:57 |
| |  Hi Lilian,
 I don't know how to put it in other words, because it is a figure of speech.
I think that the man wrote this was so sad, that his heart was frozen, and even his tears transformed into snowflakes...
Does this help?
Madeleine |
| | 25 July 2008 13:17 |
| | I think we could say just:
"tears are falling like snow in my heart" |
| | 25 July 2008 18:53 |
| |  Hi Lilian, I edited as you suggested. Thank you! |
| | 26 July 2008 10:53 |
|  Freya Number of messages: 1910 | "simt că sunt la propriul apus" I guess it could be translated like :"I feel that I'm reaching my end" ...the person is trying to express that he/she is about to die or something...it's about an end,and not about being useless. That's my opinion.  |
| | 26 July 2008 11:27 |
| |  And you are right;
I don't think he is dying, but I'm sure he feels he is reaching an end. It could mean he is feeling useless, or done, or gone or...many other things, because it's a beautiful but strange text.
Anyway, I've edited.
As always, thanks, Freya.
CC: Freya |
| | 26 July 2008 12:34 |
|  Freya Number of messages: 1910 | OK. I'm glad I could help.  ..yes, "apus" anyway means "end" of something: life, trust ect. CC: lilian canale |
| | 26 July 2008 12:36 |
|  Freya Number of messages: 1910 | Madeleine ...I couldn't CC you...? You are the first in the row, but no check box.  |
| | 26 July 2008 12:42 |
| |  Yes, I know, it happened to me too. But don't worry, I always look on the "New messages list".
Great day! |
| | 26 July 2008 13:52 |
|  Freya Number of messages: 1910 | Maddie...you still have the 2 "I'm" in the text.
A great day to you too!  |
| | 26 July 2008 14:53 |
| | Hi girls,
The translator and the requestor get the messages automatically, you don't need to cc them, that's why there isn't a checking box for them. |