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| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 18日 18:25 |
| | This is not good English. You did well in the other translations so I am inclined to think this one you did when you were tired. Here are the bad parts:
we await your mail to be sent to our @mail address confirming whether or not there are any remarks you would like to add.
" according to me" Do you mean concerning me? Or to my attention. This last line is totally not understandable in the context of the paragraph. |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 18日 21:48 |
| kfetoचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 953 | hmm that bad part is pretty much the whole translation then.
i guess i stuck to much to the original word for word.
I'll correct it later because now i'm even more tired, perhaps by then some good Samaritan will have done it.
about the last line like i said in the remarks i don't understand it in the original either. As far as i can tell it does not mean "concerning me" or "to my attention" though that would make more sense |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 18日 21:54 |
| | well...we have to work something out friend. It can't stay as it is.
Best,
David |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 18日 22:04 |
| kfetoचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 953 | you're right, it can't
well perhaps a native english speaker could rephrase it? or a turkish speaker who understands the meaning of "bana göre" within that sentence could edit it? |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 19日 08:28 |
| | That is definately an idea...I will put it up to a
native Turkish speaking administrator.
Best,
David |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 19日 08:34 |
| | Please look at this: We need to know how to phrase the last part and how to translate bana gore.
Thanks
David CC: smy |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 19日 08:48 |
| smyचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 2481 | Hello dramati and kfeto!
"bana göre" has a typo, it should be "buna göre"=in respect to this,
so the second part should be:
"in respect to this, we await your mail to our @mail address... regarding whether there are any items you would like to add"
now, I'll edit the source |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 19日 10:06 |
| kfetoचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 953 | thanks smy... amazing how much a single letter threw me off |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 19日 11:16 |
| smyचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 2481 | thesese typos are real nuisances always , why did you check the page dramati? |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 19日 11:41 |
| | I wanted to be sure that it got to you as an amin. and Turkish expert. |
| | 2008年 फेब्रुअरी 19日 11:43 |
| smyचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 2481 | sure it did |