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| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:05 |
| | Hi Queenbee,
What do you mean by "I'm having a time with Naz"?
I'm having a good time?
"...because life is a school also."
Do you mean: "school is also part of life"?
"my lips are on your lips"
"I have no day without you" That does not sound well.
What about: "There isn't a day when you aren't with me"?
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| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:18 |
| | Hi Lilian,
'I m having a time with Naz' mean is Naz and me are always together, it is like I'm having a good time but in the passage there is no any information about having GOOD time.
'Because life is a school' mean is we are going to school to learn something, life is same, its like a school everyday we are learnig something in our life.
'I have no day without you' mean is everyday I m thinking about you. everyday I m with you but not physically, only in my mind |
| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:21 |
| | 'May be life is like a school' is better? |
| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:30 |
| | Lilian, I guess it should be this way :
1- I spend time with Naz
2- your life itself is a school
3- Right now close your eyes and feel my lips on your lips
4- No one of my days pass without you (because) you are always in my mind and in my heart.
Do you agree Queenbee? |
| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:31 |
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| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:33 |
| | Hi turkishmiss
Yes ı agreee, Your sentences are more meaningful than my sentences. |
| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:46 |
| | OK girls, I've made some edition. Please tell me if they convey the meaning. |
| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 16:52 |
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| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 8日 18:54 |
| | "There isn't a day when you aren't with me" can be better for me.
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| | 2008年 सेप्टेम्बर 9日 01:52 |
| | " there is no day that passes without you " have to be used instead of " you are present in all my days " |