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Translation - Turkish-English - Bu mum dün gece elinde olan mumdu.Mumum üstünde...

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Bu mum dün gece elinde olan mumdu.Mumum üstünde...
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Submitted by dark_girl
Source language: Turkish

Bu mum dün gece elinde olan mumdu.Mumum üstünde birtakım harfler gördü fakat anlamını çözemedi.Yine mum ortadan kayboldu.Okul dönüşü tüm bunları düşünerek eve gitti.Akşam olduğunda korkmaya başlamıştı.Uyumaya gitti fakat bir türlü uyuyamıyordu. Birden elinde yine o mum belirdi. Üstünde "Sen Öleceksin" yazıyordu. Birden sarsıldı ve boğazında kuvvetli iki el hissetti. Dehşete kapılmıştı. Kafasını kaldırıp baktığı anda aniden sarsıldı. Mum canlanmıştı...

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Candle...
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Translated by Sunnybebek
Target language: English

This was the candle he had in his hand last night. He saw several letters on it but he couldn’t make them out, the candle disappeared again. During his return home from school he was thinking about all these things. When evening came, he began to fear. He went to sleep, but he couldn't possibly fall asleep. Suddenly, that candle appeared in his hand again, “You will die” was written on it. Suddenly he began to shake and felt two strong hands on his throat. He was terrified. When he raised his head and looked, he suddenly began to shake. The candle came to life...
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his/her
He/She
canlanmıştı - dropped alive/ took on life/ became animated
Validated by Chantal - 15 January 2010 13:50





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7 January 2010 20:42

Chantal
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Hi Sunnybebek, I've got some suggestions for some small edits..:

Bu mum dün gece elinde olan mumdu. - This candle is the candle he had in his hand last night.

Okul dönüşü tüm bunları düşünerek eve gitti. - During his return home from school he was thinking about these things.

Üstünde "Sen Öleceksin" yazıyordu. - (...) and 'You Will Die' was written on it.

Mum canlanmıştı... - The candle came to life

10 January 2010 19:42

Sunnybebek
จำนวนข้อความ: 758
Hi Chantal!
- "Bu mum dün gece elinde olan mumdu. - This candle is the candle he had in his hand last night." - I'm not sure if this one is correct...
- "Okul dönüşü tüm bunları düşünerek eve gitti. - During his return home from school he was thinking about all these things."
- "Üstünde "Sen Öleceksin" yazıyordu. - (...) and 'You Will Die' was written on it."
- "Mum canlanmıştı... - The candle came to life."

10 January 2010 20:21

Chantal
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I'll try to explain sunnybebek

Bu mum dün gece elinde olan mumdu.

mumdu - it was the candle

dun gece elinde olan - the one he had in his hand last night

bu mum - this candle..

so: this candle is the candle he had in his hand last night?

10 January 2010 20:35

Sunnybebek
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But as for me "dun gece elinde olan" --> which was in his/her hand last night.
So "Bu mum dün gece elinde olan mumdu" --> This candle, which was in his/her hand last night, was a candle.

10 January 2010 20:41

Chantal
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hmm.. but that doesn't really make any sense, is it a 'good' sentence in turkish if you translate it like this? 'dun gece elinde olan mum, mumdu.' ?

10 January 2010 20:51

Sunnybebek
จำนวนข้อความ: 758
Hmm, actually I think it would be better if we ask our Turkish experts Because I'm not sure too...
What do you think?

10 January 2010 21:02

Chantal
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arkadaslar can any of you help us out pls?

CC: 44hazal44 cheesecake handyy smy

11 January 2010 17:02

44hazal44
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This candle was the candle he had in his hand last night.

"was" because it's "mumDU"