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กลุ่ม Poetry - Love / Friendship

Title	Awaiting
Text Submitted by Aneta B.	Source language: English Translated by iluvmilka You kindle a bonfire in me You leave... It takes a long time to fade away ... I don't want to help it I don't want to look at the grey ash ... I don't want to feel the emptiness and yearning For what has been and might never come back I don't want to give you everything In order not to lose it I don't want to tell you everything It's not worth it ... I want what you want - Your presence and closeness Your remembrance Male passion Your admiration ...
Remarks about the translation	Edited: rememberance -> remembrance

Title

L'attesa

Translation

Italian

Translated by

alexfatt

Target language: Italian

Accendi un falÃ² dentro me,
Te ne vai...
Ci vuole molto tempo perchÃ© si spenga...
Non voglio aiutarlo
Non voglio guardare la grigia cenere
Non voglio sentire vacuitÃ e bramosia
Per ciÃ² che Ã¨ stato e che potrebbe non tornare piÃ¹.

Non voglio darti tutto
Per non perderlo
Non voglio dirti tutto
Non ne vale la pena...

Io voglio ciÃ² che vuoi tu -
La tua presenza, la tua vicinanza
Il tuo ricordo
La tua virile passione
La tua ammirazione...

Validated by alexfatt - 30 April 2012 16:00

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		20 April 2012 18:41
	alexfatt จำนวนข้อความ: 1538	Hi Aneta Just a question... "I don't want to help it" means "I don't want to help it to fade away" or "I don't want to help it by rekindling it"?
		21 April 2012 00:31
	Aneta B. จำนวนข้อความ: 4487	"I don't want to help it (to fade away)" = I wish the "sweet bonfire" could burn in me for ever! Thanks for the translation, dear! I love the rhyme at the end. (There isn't any rhyme in my Polish version).
		21 April 2012 20:14
	alexfatt จำนวนข้อความ: 1538	You're welcome! The final rhyme was unexpected