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Translation - Turkish-English - ilgili makama Türkiye'de büyük beğeni...

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ilgili makama Türkiye'de büyük beğeni...
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Submitted by betterfleid
Source language: Turkish

Ä°lgili Makama,

Türkiye'de büyük beğeni toplamış bir deri firmasıyız. Ben firmamızın dış ticaret müdürüyüm. Firmamız 6 yıldır deri işleme işiyle uğraşmaktadır. Çeşitli deri firmalarıyla yaptığımız işler büyük beğeni toplamıştır. Sizden bu sebepleri göz önüne alarak Türkiye distribütörlüğü istiyoruz.

Firmamız adına size şimdiden teşekkür ederiz. Cevabınızı sabırsızlıkla beklemekteyiz.

Title
To whom it may concern...
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Translated by Mesud2991
Target language: English

To whom it may concern,

We are a highly praised leather company in Turkey. I am the foreign trade manager of the company. The company has been in the business of processing leather for six years. Our dealings with a variety of leather companies have received high praise. Taking this into consideration, we would like to request distributorship for Turkey.

I thank you in advance in the name of the company. We are looking forward to receiving your answer.
Validated by Lein - 6 February 2013 09:30





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31 January 2013 17:44

Lein
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Hi Mesud,

To make the text flow better, how about this?

The company has been embroidering leather for six years.

or

The company has been in the business of leather embroidering for six years.

Also a few remarks:

- Taking these into consideration -> taking the praises into consideration. This sounds a bit odd. Could we change this to 'Taking this (meaning, the aforementioned) into consideration'?

- we demand the Turkey distributorship -> Ouch! This sounds very rude in English. When you demand something, you bang your fist on the table, there may be shouting, you are probably trying to intimidate your audience. How about 'we request'? Or, even more polite, 'we would like to obtain'?

- As for the last sentence, a more commonly used formula is 'we are looking forward to (receiving) your answer'. Would that work?

Thanks!

31 January 2013 17:39

Mesud2991
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Hi Lein,

Good to see you back!

You can improve the text however you like. Thank you very much for the adjustments.

31 January 2013 17:45

Lein
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Yes, I have not been around much lately - I'll try to come here more often once more!

31 January 2013 17:53

Mesud2991
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That's good news.

31 January 2013 23:20

merdogan
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embroidering...> handling

31 January 2013 23:33

Mesud2991
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Handling leather???

The equivalent of the word "embroider" in Turkish is "iÅŸlemek" (...deri iÅŸleme iÅŸiyle...). I guess your suggetion is for the word "uÄŸraÅŸmak".

1 February 2013 00:04

merdogan
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"İşlemek" deri üzerine "nakış vs " yapmaktır. Deriyi işlemek ,ham deriyi mamul deri haline getirmek için yapılan "tabaklama" anlamındadır.

"handling" means "to tan" here.
"embroidering" means to make "decoration" on leder.

1 February 2013 00:09

Mesud2991
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-Ki 'handle' bu anlamı karşılamaz.

I'm unfamiliar with the word 'handle' meaning 'iÅŸlemek'. Let's wait what Lein will say.

1 February 2013 20:09

Lein
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Hello!
'embroidering' is something like decorating (usually with wool or thread); 'handling' is doing anything with it (if it 'goes through your hands', literally or figuratively, you handle it). If you mean tanning, how about we put tanning down?
Hope this helps...

1 February 2013 20:29

Mesud2991
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'Tanning' would be the best choice.

Or how about 'processing'?

1 February 2013 21:44

Mesud2991
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Thinking about it over, I found it more suitable to say "processing".

Actually "iÅŸlemek" can also mean "embroider"
Have a look at this video (the title reads "deri işleme makinası", which translates as "leather embroidery machine":

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_bQRSCzpO0

I guess 'processing' might include an embroidery process. So in that case, It is better to say 'processing'


2 February 2013 01:12

merdogan
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'processing' can be o.k for me.

3 February 2013 12:44

Lein
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processing
Thanks!