Cucumis - Free online translation service

Home

News

Translation

Help

เข้าสู่ระบบ(Log in)

สมัครสมาชิก(Register)

. .

•‎Home
•‎Submit a new text to be translated
•‎Requested translations
•‎Completed translations
•‎

Favorite translations
•‎

•‎Translation of the web-site
•‎ค้นหา

▪Free language exchange

Translation - Italian-English - Gl Artwork 7 - (incomplete)

Current status ‎Translation

This text is available in the following languages:

Italian

English

กลุ่ม Explanations - Arts / Creation / Imagination

Title	Gl Artwork 7 - (incomplete)
Text Submitted by Xini	Source language: Italian La dicotomia tra intellegibile e non-intellegibile Ã¨ ispirata alle prime battute del quartetto nÂ° 19 "Dissonanze" di Mozart, mentre le immagini rimandano metaforicamente a vari aspetti della vita e delle opere del compositore, delineando, in una sorta di rituale pagano, una foresta di simboli nella quale ciascuno Ã¨ chiamato a trovare, se possibile, nuove corrispondenze.
Remarks about the translation	"foresta di simboli" is related to the famous Baudelaire poem. http://poesie.webnet.fr/poemes/France/baudelai/3.html

Title	GL Artwork - Unfinished
Translation English Translated by Tantine	Target language: English The dichotomy between the intelligible and the unintelligible is inspired by the first beats of Mozartâ€™s string quartet no. 19 â€œDissonanceâ€ whilst the images metaphorically echo the various aspects of the life and works of the composer, sketching, in a kind of pagan ritual, a forest-grove of symbols in which each person is asked to discover, if possible, new interrelations.
Remarks about the translation	I checked out for Baudelaire's poem: chose Roy Campbell's tranlation - http://fleursdumal.org/poem/103 I added "in C Major" to the title of Mozart's quartet but it may be superfluous.

Validated by kafetzou - 11 July 2007 21:57

ตอบล่าสุด

	ผู้ตั้ง	ตอบ
		10 July 2007 11:30
	Xini จำนวนข้อความ: 1655	Since "overture" is itself a musical term, it can be misunderstood. I changed into "le prime battute". You may say now "by the first bars/measures" You can omit "in C major". outlining, in a sort of pagan ritual, through forest-groves of symbols, between which is one brought to seek, if possible, new correspondances. This phrase is not clear to me. why through? it seems there is no Direct Object here... The direct object should be the forest of symbols. And are "is" and "one" in the correct order? Shouldn't it be "between which one is..."? Is the use of "between" ok? I thought it was used only speaking of two or more definite/concrete things. Thanks.
		12 July 2007 09:44
	Xini จำนวนข้อความ: 1655	Somebody has changed to "Dissonance", first it was "Dissonant" and I always thought it was "Dissonances" (like in italian). Kafetzou, you who are musician, do you know something about this? CC: kafetzou
		12 July 2007 11:26
	Tantine จำนวนข้อความ: 2747	Hi Xini I checked out Mozart's string quartet nÂ° 19 and it is called "Dissonance" in English. See: http://www.kennedy-center.org/calendar/?fuseaction=composition&composition_id=3082 Bises Tantine
		12 July 2007 13:54
	kafetzou จำนวนข้อความ: 7963	I was the one who changed it to "Dissonance", but I don't know anything about classical music.
		12 July 2007 14:06
	Xini จำนวนข้อความ: 1655	Ok. But if you google it you find all the three spellings. That's ok as it is.