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Uyandım birden seninle Gece üçü bulmamış Bir ...
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Submitted by Smoke01
Source language: Turkish

Uyandım birden seninle
Gece üçü bulmamış
Bir bulut durdu gözümde
Hasret bize uymamış

Kalp kalbe karşı derler
Sende üzüldün mü
Ay bile çeker gider
Geceyi düşündün mü

Yanlızlık bende
Çıkmaz bir an dışarı
Elimde bir fotoÄŸraf
O şimdi burda olmalı

Kalp kalbe karşı derler
Sende üzüldün mü
Ay bile çeker gider
Beni hiç düşündün mü

Sensizlik bende
Çıkmaz bir an dışarı
Elimde bir fotoÄŸraf
O şimdi burda olmalı

Gönderen: Büşra

Title
Suddenly I woke up with you...
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English

Translated by turkishmiss
Target language: English

Suddenly I woke up with you
At night, it wasn’t three o’clock yet
A cloud stopped on my eyes
yearning wasn’t good for us

They say heart to heart
Did you get sad too
Even the moon wanes
Did you think about night

Loneliness hidden within me
Never leaves me even for a while
A picture in my hand
He should be here now

They say heart to heart
Did you get sad too
Even the moon waxes
Did you never think of me

Longing for you hidden within me
Never leaves me even for a while
A picture in my hand
He should be here now

Sender : Büşra
Remarks about the translation
They say heart to heart it's an expression,
the meaning is : a heart feels what the other heart does.
Validated by Tantine - 5 Tháng 4 2008 00:26





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23 Tháng 3 2008 02:20

Tantine
Tổng số bài gửi: 2747
Hi Turkishmiss

This seems quite good, but we need to do one or two edits to make it a little "smoother"

"Even moon goes away" doesn't sound right, we need to say this otherwise.

In english we would probably say "heart to heart", rather than "heart against heart",

Maybe you could put "within" rather than "in" => "hidden within me"

Maybe you could use the word "yearning" instead of "longing"

The last two are just suggestions as the words you have used are quite correct, so feel free to leave them as they are if you want to.

Big bises
Tantine

25 Tháng 3 2008 18:01

nihil
Tổng số bài gửi: 40
a cloud stopped on my eyes ne demek ya?

25 Tháng 3 2008 23:22

punkd20
Tổng số bài gửi: 2
yearning doesnt fits for us.

5 Tháng 4 2008 00:26

Tantine
Tổng số bài gửi: 2747
Hi Turkishmiss

I've edited to put "the" in front of "moon" and I've changed "goes away" to "wanes". This is the term which is generally opposed to the term "waxes" when dealing with our "silver satellite", so it fits really well here.

I'll validate now

Bises
Tantine

5 Tháng 4 2008 12:35

turkishmiss
Tổng số bài gửi: 2132
Thank you Tantine.