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Title	Ils sont trÃ¨s utilisÃ©s, parce qu'ils sont trÃ¨s...
Text Submitted by patrick1980	Source language: French Ils sont trÃ¨s utilisÃ©s, parce qu'ils sont trÃ¨s rassurants. Sans oublier la pyramide de risque, qui est un autre outil pour Ã©valuer le risque par rapport Ã ses propres choix. Pour finir on utilise aussi le sentiment de l'investisseur pour se faire une idÃ©e prÃ©cise du marchÃ©. En conclusion : Tout le monde se mÃ©fie de tout le monde. Tout le monde cherche Ã connaÃ®tre ce que les autres ont l'intention de faire sur les marchÃ©s boursiers. La psychologie est la clÃ© du succÃ¨s.
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The Risk Pyramid

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Triton21

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They are used extensively because they are very reassuring. Bearing in mind the "Risk Pyramid," which is also an instrument used to evaluate the potential risk relative to one's own choices. Finally, the investors' sentiments are used to get an accurate idea of the market involved.
In conclusion: People distrust one another. Everyone seeks to know what the others intend to do within the stock market. Psychology is the key to success.

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- 29 Tháng 4 2008 22:20

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		29 Tháng 4 2008 19:41
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	Hi Triton, I don't think you changed the structure correctly. The first sentence in the original is in a plural form: "Ils sont trÃ¨s utilisÃ©s, parce qu'ils sont trÃ¨s rassurants". I don't think it refers to "The Risk Pyramid". Think that over and try to give a new version, OK?
		29 Tháng 4 2008 20:22
	Triton21 Tổng số bài gửi: 124	Ok, Lilly. I have looked over the text again and have made what I feel are improvements.
		29 Tháng 4 2008 20:53
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	You have, indeed, improved the text. I have just a few suggestions: They are used extensively because they are very reassuring. Bearing in mind the "Risk Pyramid," which is also an instrument used to evaluate the potential risk relative to one's own choices. Finally, the investors' sentiments are used to get an accurate idea of the market involved. In conclusion: People distrust one another. Everyone seeks to know what the others intend to do within the stock market. Psychology is the key to success. What do you think?
		29 Tháng 4 2008 20:58
	Triton21 Tổng số bài gửi: 124	Excellent. I am pleased with the suggestions you have made and will begin to make those edits now.