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Dịch - Romanian-English - inima mea e slabita tare.Mi e rupta in mii de...Current status Dịch
Nhóm chuyên mục Chat  This translation request is "Meaning only". | inima mea e slabita tare.Mi e rupta in mii de... | | Source language: Romanian
inima mea e slabită tare. Mi-e ruptă în mii de bucăţi; ştiu că într-o zi o să-mi ceri iertare, până atunci o să înveţi... că mie acum sufletul mi se stinge. Încrederea în mine, în viaţă, s-au dus, pe inima mea cu lacrimi ninge, simt că sunt la propriu apus.... | Remarks about the translation | Changed with diacritics - azitrad
original version: "nima mea e slabita tare.Mi e rupta in mii de bucati;stiu ca intr o zi o sa mi ceri iertare,pana atenci o sa inverti...sa mie acum sufletul mi se stinge.increde n mine,in viata,s as dus,pe inima mea cu lacrimi ninge,simt ca suntla propi um apus...." |
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| My heart is extremely weakened. | | Target language: English
My heart is extremely weakened. It's torn apart in a thousand pieces; I know one day you'll ask for my forgiveness, until then you'll learn...that my soul is fading. The trust I have in myself, in life, is gone, tears are falling like snow in my heart,I feel that I'm reaching my end... |
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26 Tháng 7 2008 14:18 | | |  Hi Madeleine,
I've edited the accent " ´ " into the apostrophe " ' " and "in thousands of pieces" into "in a thousand pieces".
But this line:
"it's snowing with tears on my heart" still sounds weird.
Could you explain that with different words?
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25 Tháng 7 2008 09:57 | | | Hi Lilian,
 I don't know how to put it in other words, because it is a figure of speech.
I think that the man wrote this was so sad, that his heart was frozen, and even his tears transformed into snowflakes...
Does this help?
Madeleine | | |
25 Tháng 7 2008 13:17 | | | I think we could say just:
"tears are falling like snow in my heart" | | |
25 Tháng 7 2008 18:53 | | | Hi Lilian, I edited as you suggested. Thank you! | | |
26 Tháng 7 2008 10:53 | | 
Freya Tổng số bài gửi: 1910 | "simt că sunt la propriul apus" I guess it could be translated like :"I feel that I'm reaching my end" ...the person is trying to express that he/she is about to die or something...it's about an end,and not about being useless. That's my opinion. | | |
26 Tháng 7 2008 11:27 | | | And you are right;
I don't think he is dying, but I'm sure he feels he is reaching an end. It could mean he is feeling useless, or done, or gone or...many other things, because it's a beautiful but strange text.
Anyway, I've edited.
As always, thanks, Freya. 
CC: Freya | | |
26 Tháng 7 2008 12:34 | |
FreyaTổng số bài gửi: 1910 | OK. I'm glad I could help. ..yes, "apus" anyway means "end" of something: life, trust ect. CC: lilian canale | | |
26 Tháng 7 2008 12:36 | |
FreyaTổng số bài gửi: 1910 | Madeleine ...I couldn't CC you...? You are the first in the row, but no check box.  | | |
26 Tháng 7 2008 12:42 | | | Yes, I know, it happened to me too. But don't worry, I always look on the "New messages list". 
Great day! | | |
26 Tháng 7 2008 13:52 | |
FreyaTổng số bài gửi: 1910 | Maddie...you still have the 2 "I'm" in the text.
A great day to you too! | | |
26 Tháng 7 2008 14:53 | | | Hi girls,
The translator and the requestor get the messages automatically, you don't need to cc them, that's why there isn't a checking box for them.  |
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