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Dịch - German-English - Kleid aus RosenCurrent status Dịch
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Nhóm chuyên mục Song - Love / Friendship  This translation request is "Meaning only". | | | Source language: German
Ein gutes Mädchen lief einst fort
Verließ der Kindheit schönen Ort
Verließ die Eltern und sogar
den Mann, dem sie versprochen war
Vor einem Haus, da blieb sie stehn
Darinnen war ein Mann zu sehn
Der wilde stach in nackte Haut
Da rief das gute Mädchen laut:
Meister, Meister gib mir Rosen
Rosen auf mein weißes Kleid
Stech die Blumen in den bloßen
unberührten Mädchenleib
"Diese Rosen kosten Blut"
Sprach der Meister sanft und gut
"Enden früh dein junges Leben,
will dir lieber keine geben"
Doch das Mädchen war vernarrt
Hat auf Knien ausgeharrt
Bis er nicht mehr widerstand
Und die Nadel nahm zur Hand
Und aus seinem tiefen Stechen
Wuchsen Blätter, wuchsen Blüten
Wuchsen unbekannte Schmerzen
In dem jungen Mädchenherzen
Später hat man sie gesehn
Einsam an den Wassern stehn
Niemals hat man je erfahrn
Welchen Preis der Meister nahm... | Remarks about the translation | Subway to Sally - Kleid aus Rosen
Thank you! :) |
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A good girl ran away earlier
Left childhood's beautiful place
Left the parents and even
The man she was promised to
In front of a house she stopped
Inside a man could be seen
who pierced pictures into naked skin
Then the good girl shouted out
Master, master give me roses
Roses on my white dress
Stick the flowers into the naked
Untouched body of this girl
"These roses cost blood"
Spoke master soft and good
"They cut your young life short,
I'd rather not give you any"
But the girl was madly in love
On her knees persisted
Until he didn't resist anymore
And he took the needle in his hand
And from his deep incision
Grew leaves, grew bloods
Grew unknown pains
In the heart of the young girl
Later somebody saw her
Standing alone at the water's edge
Nobody ever discovered
What price the Master took...
| Remarks about the translation | Roses on my white dress: probably meaning on my white skin |
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Validated by Lein - 17 Tháng 1 2011 12:44
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13 Tháng 1 2011 14:01 | | 
LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | Hi patty bouvier 
Just a few remarks here to improve the English text, please let me know what you think of them:
A good girl ran away earlier
Left childhood's beautiful place
Left the parents and even
The man she was promised to
In front of a house she stopped
Inside a man could be seen
Wild one stuck into bare skin -> This was a mistake in the request I think - it should be: der Bilder stach in nackte Haut -> who pierced pictures into naked / bare skin
Then the good girl shouted loudly, or (I think this fits better) shouted out
Master, master give me roses
Roses on my white dress
Stick the flowers into the naked
Untouched body of this girl
"These roses cost blood"
Spoke master soft and good
"They cut your young life short,
I'd rather not give you any"
But the girl was in love
On her knees persisted
Till he didn't resist anymore
And he took the needle in his hand
And from his deep incision
Grew leaves, grew bloods
Grew unknown pains
In the heart of the young girl
Later somebody saw her
Standing alone at the water's edge
Nobody ever discovered
What price the Mmaster took... | | |
13 Tháng 1 2011 14:00 | |
LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | Hi nevena
Have a look at my post above and if you agree, could you correct the second verse? ('der wilde stach' -> 'der Bilder stach' )
Thank you!  CC: nevena-77 | | |
13 Tháng 1 2011 14:31 | | 
Freya Tổng số bài gửi: 1910 | I'm sorry for the trouble. I took the lyrics from the internet. It seems that I didn't pick a good source. 
Thank you all! | | |
13 Tháng 1 2011 14:40 | |
LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | No worries, only a small mistake | | |
14 Tháng 1 2011 10:59 | |
LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | No reply 
I have edited. Next time, patty, please let us know what you think when there are people trying to help and improve your translations
Could one of the German experts please edit the line in the second verse?
der wilde stach -> der Bilder stach in nackte Haut
Thanks! CC: nevena-77 iamfromaustria | | |
14 Tháng 1 2011 11:36 | | | I'm so sorry that i replied so late.But i'm busy with my exams.And i'm glad that you've edited my mistakes.
Thanks. | | |
14 Tháng 1 2011 11:38 | |
LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | OK, no worries and good luck with your exams
(I saw you had logged in but not replied, that is why I went ahead and edited.) | | |
14 Tháng 1 2011 11:42 | | | Thanks a lot.
Yes,but there isn't enough time for me to edit.I hope you'll understand. | | |
14 Tháng 1 2011 15:17 | | |
Dear Lein,
I agree with you for,
"who pierced pictures into bare skin"
"shouted out"
and
But the girl was in love...> But the girl was in crazy love
Mmaster...> master (last line) | | |
14 Tháng 1 2011 15:47 | |
LeinTổng số bài gửi: 3389 | Oops! Corrected the double M! I'll wait for patty's reply on the other point | | |
14 Tháng 1 2011 16:09 | | | Yes,i agree with merdogan for, 'but the girl was in crazy love.' |
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