Переклад - Іспанська-Англійська - El vehículo cuyas características se reseñan

Hi Una

Just some nitpicking about commas, my favorite punctuation mark! I have a big sack full next to my computer!

Between:

"vehicle" and "the features"
"date" and "the presciptions"
"roads" and "as defined"
"declare" and "under"
"responsibility" and "that"

and two suggestions:

Could "...pertaining to..." replace "that which pertains to" ?

Would "...reason for which..." not be better than ...for which reason..." ?

Tantine, I agree with you about the text needing commas. However, correcting the punctuation is editing, not translating. I do not correct the punctuation except when correction is necessary to achieve the meaning of the source text.

Una,

I just saw that the source text didn't have many commas either

Maybe I should also propose some commas to anyone who wants some

Bises
Tantine

Irini: there are a lot of orthographical mistakes in the source text in Spanish, mainly diacritics. Here is how I would write it:

"El vehículo cuyas características se reseñan, cumple en esta fecha las prescripciones que para circular por las vías públicas señala el vigente Código de la Circulación y reglamentación pertinente.
Solicitud de baja del vehículo.
Declaro bajo mi responsabilidad que el vehículo ha sido retirado de la circulación, por lo que solicito la baja indicada."

Thanks guilon!

Could you post the same here which is the original request? Mine was just a way to get an interim translation

Thank you all