翻译 - 土耳其语-英语 - Erbil’ in yanlışlığı sadece çalışanların yaptığı...

"and that only as much money will be earned as it has risen." This could be phrased better and more clearly in English.

public civil servant system = public civil service system

How about making a few changes?

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Whenever you want to make sure that a translator or an expert gets notified of a message that you write under a translation, check the notifications list under your comment before you send it, and put a check mark by the name of the person you want to notify. That's the system I've been trying to get you to use. Do you understand now?

I hope this edit works - to be honest I'm still not thrilled with it, and I'd be open to any suggestions on your part.

I don't know...you are really great in both English and Turkish...maybe it could be polished a little bit more, like this:

Where Erbil is wrong is in only giving importance to the work done by the workers(employees) and in thinking that the company will only rise as far as the amount they work(of work they put into it), and that the amount of money earned will be (in accordance with)according to the amount the company has risen.
He has taken no steps regarding the distribution of income among the workers and the inequality among the (their) incomes - the only thing that is important to him is his expectations. The salary system seems to have been conceived (from the public civil service system)of like the public civil service system - whether the worker does his work or not, he gets his salary.

The stuff inside the ( ) is a possible suggestion. But still, as it is, it stands on its own.

CC: kafetzou

Yay - you did it! I'll make some of the changes you suggest.

What do you think of it now?

Wonderful. But you always are. I love your writing style.