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翻译 - 巴西葡萄牙语-英语 - Balaio men bem Balaio sinhà Balaio do coraçâo...当前状态 翻译
讨论区 歌曲 - 爱 / 友谊 | Balaio men bem Balaio sinhà Balaio do coraçâo... | | 源语言: 巴西葡萄牙语
Balaio, meu bem, balaio,
Balaio do coração,
Moça que não tem balaio
Bota a costura no chão.
Eu quisera ser balaio
Balaio quisera ser
Para andar dependurado
Na cintura de você
Você diz que não ama
Mais isso não é verdade
Quem não ama nunca sente
As esporas da saudade. |
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| | | 目的语言: 英语
A basket made of straws, my darling
A basket to the heart is bound.
A girl who doesn't have a basket
Lays her sewing down to the ground.
I wanted to be a basket,
A basket I wanted to be,
For going wheresoever
From your waist hanging free.
You say you don't love me
But the truth you don't portray,
As not loving is also not suffering
For the one who is far away. | | "Balaio" is both a kind of basket and a dance of African origin, which can be seen in some parts of Brazil.
IMPORTANT: THE VERSION ABOVE IS A MORE POETICAL ONE, WITH RHYMES. A MORE LITTERAL VERSION:
A basket, my darling, a basket,
A basket from the heart,
A girl who doesn't have a basket
Put her sewing works on the ground.
I wanted to be a basket
A basket I wanted to be
For going attached
To the waist of yours.
You say you don't love me
But that isn't true
He who doesn't love will never suffer under
The spurs of missing the beloved one. |
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2008年 四月 18日 16:06 | | | Hi Goncin,
Come on! You are a poet...what about some rhyme here? 
Work on it a little bit more, I know you can get a better version. OK? 
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2008年 四月 18日 16:20 | | | "in the dirt" would rhyme with "from the heart"
...but I'm awful at poetry   | | |
2008年 四月 18日 17:22 | | | "dirt" and "heart" rhyme? Really?  My pronounciation has to be awful then....  CC: Francky5591 | | |
2008年 四月 18日 17:26 | | |  That goes well with my awfulness in poetry, so...
Not that different in pronounciation though, closer than "ground" anyway | | |
2008年 四月 18日 17:32 | | | I think "dart", the game with the arrows, would fit better ("dart" and "heart" is quite nice, isn't it?  ). So what about:
A basket, my darling, a basket,
A basket from the heart,
One of Amor's arrows hit me,
when he was playing dart.
CC: Francky5591 | | |
2008年 四月 18日 17:47 | | | | | |
2008年 四月 18日 18:14 | | | Oh, we just say "Dart" so I forgot the "s". Maybe we should really give Goncy's poetry a chance and create our own poet We've already got one line, so now it's your turn CC: Francky5591 | | |
2008年 四月 18日 18:24 | | | | | |
2008年 四月 18日 18:26 | | | But wouldn't that be changing the original text too much, or can you do that? | | |
2008年 四月 18日 18:48 | | | You wanted rhymes, you got them! | | |
2008年 四月 18日 19:03 | | | NOW, THAT'S POETRY!!!
I knew you would do it! | | |
2008年 四月 18日 19:52 | | | It's really good! So much better than my "suggestion" | | |
2008年 四月 18日 20:22 | | | Keep on trying, kids! 
A basket, my darling, a basket,
A basket from the heart,
One of Amor's arrows hit me,
when he was playing dart.
That was really funny! | | |
2008年 四月 18日 20:27 | | | My Gosh! You have done a great job!
This is a poem! You don't have only my vote, you became my idol! | | |
2008年 四月 18日 20:46 | | | Less, Diego_Kovags, less... | | |
2008年 四月 18日 21:47 | | | Hehehe... "Escolinha do Professor Raimundo" |
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