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Titolo	Balaio men bem Balaio sinhÃ Balaio do coraÃ§Ã¢o...
Teksto Submetigx per ellasevia	Font-lingvo: Brazil-portugala Balaio, meu bem, balaio, Balaio do coraÃ§Ã£o, MoÃ§a que nÃ£o tem balaio Bota a costura no chÃ£o. Eu quisera ser balaio Balaio quisera ser Para andar dependurado Na cintura de vocÃª VocÃª diz que nÃ£o ama Mais isso nÃ£o Ã© verdade Quem nÃ£o ama nunca sente As esporas da saudade.

Titolo	Basket
Traduko Angla Tradukita per goncin	Cel-lingvo: Angla A basket made of straws, my darling A basket to the heart is bound. A girl who doesn't have a basket Lays her sewing down to the ground. I wanted to be a basket, A basket I wanted to be, For going wheresoever From your waist hanging free. You say you don't love me But the truth you don't portray, As not loving is also not suffering For the one who is far away.
Rimarkoj pri la traduko	"Balaio" is both a kind of basket and a dance of African origin, which can be seen in some parts of Brazil. IMPORTANT: THE VERSION ABOVE IS A MORE POETICAL ONE, WITH RHYMES. A MORE LITTERAL VERSION: A basket, my darling, a basket, A basket from the heart, A girl who doesn't have a basket Put her sewing works on the ground. I wanted to be a basket A basket I wanted to be For going attached To the waist of yours. You say you don't love me But that isn't true He who doesn't love will never suffer under The spurs of missing the beloved one.

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- 18 Aprilo 2008 23:04

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	Aŭtoro	Afiŝo
		18 Aprilo 2008 16:06
	lilian canale Nombro da afiŝoj: 14972	Hi Goncin, Come on! You are a poet...what about some rhyme here? Work on it a little bit more, I know you can get a better version. OK?
		18 Aprilo 2008 16:20
	Francky5591 Nombro da afiŝoj: 12396	"in the dirt" would rhyme with "from the heart" ...but I'm awful at poetry
		18 Aprilo 2008 17:22
	iamfromaustria Nombro da afiŝoj: 1335	"dirt" and "heart" rhyme? Really? My pronounciation has to be awful then.... CC: Francky5591
		18 Aprilo 2008 17:26
	Francky5591 Nombro da afiŝoj: 12396	That goes well with my awfulness in poetry, so... Not that different in pronounciation though, closer than "ground" anyway
		18 Aprilo 2008 17:32
	iamfromaustria Nombro da afiŝoj: 1335	I think "dart", the game with the arrows, would fit better ("dart" and "heart" is quite nice, isn't it? ). So what about: A basket, my darling, a basket, A basket from the heart, One of Amor's arrows hit me, when he was playing dart. CC: Francky5591
		18 Aprilo 2008 17:47
	Francky5591 Nombro da afiŝoj: 12396	We should add an "s" to "heart" then, as the game is known under its plural form ("darts", so that the rhyme will be perfect...but I'm afraid the basic text might be more than slightly transformed after a few of our edits, actually we should maybe let goncin find by himself, after all he's a big boy now...
		18 Aprilo 2008 18:14
	iamfromaustria Nombro da afiŝoj: 1335	Oh, we just say "Dart" so I forgot the "s". Maybe we should really give Goncy's poetry a chance and create our own poet We've already got one line, so now it's your turn CC: Francky5591
		18 Aprilo 2008 18:24
	Francky5591 Nombro da afiŝoj: 12396	Open a thread on a forum then, because here it would be fair neither to the requester, nor to the translator if the discussion area was all messed up with our comments that are out of frame( I know, it is my fault, I began to post besides the topic with my awful first post) Sorry Goncy, we won't do it again, I promise!
		18 Aprilo 2008 18:26
	ellasevia Nombro da afiŝoj: 145	But wouldn't that be changing the original text too much, or can you do that?
		18 Aprilo 2008 18:48
	goncin Nombro da afiŝoj: 3706	You wanted rhymes, you got them!
		18 Aprilo 2008 19:03
	lilian canale Nombro da afiŝoj: 14972	NOW, THAT'S POETRY!!! I knew you would do it!
		18 Aprilo 2008 19:52
	iamfromaustria Nombro da afiŝoj: 1335	It's really good! So much better than my "suggestion"
		18 Aprilo 2008 20:22
	goncin Nombro da afiŝoj: 3706	Keep on trying, kids! A basket, my darling, a basket, A basket from the heart, One of Amor's arrows hit me, when he was playing dart. That was really funny!
		18 Aprilo 2008 20:27
	Diego_Kovags Nombro da afiŝoj: 515	My Gosh! You have done a great job! This is a poem! You don't have only my vote, you became my idol!
		18 Aprilo 2008 20:46
	goncin Nombro da afiŝoj: 3706	Less, Diego_Kovags, less...
		18 Aprilo 2008 21:47
	Diego_Kovags Nombro da afiŝoj: 515	Hehehe... "Escolinha do Professor Raimundo"