翻译 - 英语-德语 - Email to property advertiser

This is an email to a landlord in Zurich, to inquire on her advertised property. The landlord only speaks German.

[Why is this field supposed to be written in German?]
It's translated a bit more free to make it more fluently readable and polite. It's difficult if not impossible to translate your text literally.

Here is a back-translation of what I made out of your text:
"I am writing to you to inquire about the room that you offer on the website x. I am very interested in this room and would like to know if it is still free. I'll soon begin Master studies at the x-university and arrive on September X in Zurich; I hope to be able to rent the room from early/mid-September onwards. I've read your offer carefully and I'm okay with all points. If you can provide some additional pictures of the building I'd greatly appreciated it. I look forward to a soon answer by you."