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翻訳 - トルコ語-英語 - Denize açıldım sevmeye, sevilmeye, Anladım...現状 翻訳
カテゴリ 表現 この翻訳依頼は意味だけで結構です。 | Denize açıldım sevmeye, sevilmeye, Anladım... | | 原稿の言語: トルコ語
Denize açıldım sevmeye, sevilmeye, Anladım sevmek gibisi yok. Yağmura soyundum yavaş yavaş yağar diye Damlalarda yüzmek gibisi yok.
Yokluğun varlığın bir, Dünüm yok, yarınım sır.. |
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I put out to sea so as to love and to be loved, I understood there's nothing like loving. I slowly took my clothes off for the rain thinking that it would rain, There's nothing like swimming in drops.
Your existence and absence are one and the same, I have no past and my future is mysterious!
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最終承認・編集者 Tantine - 2008年 10月 30日 16:00
最新記事 | | | | | 2008年 10月 8日 23:19 | | | Hi Handyy (again!!!)
Do you want us to get this to rhyme? I will think it over during the night and maybe suggest something tomorrow. If not the English is really fine I've set a poll (again!!!)
Bises
Tantine | | | 2008年 10月 10日 19:45 | | | Yep, it would be really good, but I don't know how to change the lines without losing its meaning. | | | 2008年 10月 11日 17:54 | | | I took my clothes off for the rain
thinking that it would rain slowly,slowly
Your existence and absence are same.
| | | 2008年 10月 11日 20:57 | | | No, it exactly says "I slowly took my clothes off.."
| | | 2008年 10月 12日 15:00 | | | Hi,
Bence yağmurun yavaş yağması nedeniyle soyunuluyor,ıslanılmayacağı düşünülüyor.
Aksi halde cümle " YavaÅŸ,yavaÅŸ soyundum yaÄŸmur yaÄŸar diye"" ÅŸeklinde olmalıydı. | | | 2008年 10月 12日 17:41 | | | 1) YaÄŸmurun yavaÅŸ yavaÅŸ yaÄŸması nedeniyle soyunulmuyor, tam tersine yaÄŸmur yaÄŸar belki diye soyunuluyor.
2) ıslanılmayacağı düşünülüyor deÄŸil, çünkü alt satırda "damlalarda yüzmek gibisi yok" deniliyor, yani ıslanmak isteniyor. | | | 2008年 10月 13日 11:34 | | | Bence o heyecanlı heyecanlı, yagmurun yavas yavas yagmasını bekliyorken (yeni bir deneme yapar, bir ilk yasar gibi), birseyi kesfedigini ve guzel, hos bir duygu oldugunu soylemek istiyor-- beklediginden ya da istediginden daha cok yagdıgını ve hoslandıgını, zevk aldıgını anlatıyor, bir suprizi yaÅŸar gibi...
Romence, yagmur yavas yavas yagar diye cevırdim ama tartışılır diyorum. Her ikisi de olur, emin degilim.
Ama evet, "yavas yavas soyundum" demiyor. | | | 2008年 10月 13日 16:23 | | | Primul vers e cel care ma pune pe ganduri...as fi spus mai degraba:" am pornit pe mare pentru a iubi si-a fi iubit" Altminteri, cred ca s-a pastrat muzicalitatea dar si continutul ideatic. | | | 2008年 10月 14日 07:56 | | | Ai dreptate, pentru primul vers m-am gandit la varianta asta cu "am pornit" si a iubi la neutru-masculin. Insa ınsa, chıar daca turca nu are gen, cantecul este compus si ınterpretat de o fata, Sehnem Ferah. Apoi, a porni este un fel de inceput, de ınhamare cu sau fara vointa proprie, pe cand a fi deschıs parca arata mai bine dorinta individuala de a se avanta in necunoscut. | | | 2008年 10月 14日 12:38 | | | Hi handyy
Sorry not to have posted a suggestion for rhymes yet. Before doing so, maybe I need to know what BudaBen and dasesar are saying?
Can you just give me a general idea of what they are saying?
Bises
Tantine | | | 2008年 10月 14日 14:03 | | | Actually I also don't understand what BudaBen and Dasesar are talking about, as they are talking -I guess- in Romanian.
Well, "YaÄŸmura soyundum yavaÅŸ yavaÅŸ yaÄŸar diye" this part cause some confusion. Punctuation mark lacks here. When you write this line as:
"YaÄŸmura soyundum yavaÅŸ yavaÅŸ, yaÄŸar diye", the meaning becomes "I slowly took my clothes off for the rain thinking that it would rain".
But when you put comma before "yavaÅŸ yavaÅŸ" [YaÄŸmura soyundum, yavaÅŸ yavaÅŸ yaÄŸar diye], then the meaning becomes "I took my clothes off for the rain thinking that it would rain slowly."
Merdogan and BudaBen think that the latter one is correct, but I don't agree with them. Hard to explain why I think in this way, indeed. I listened to this song at least thousand time, and I always received it like how I translated it. | | | 2008年 10月 14日 14:32 | | | I agree with Handyy, when I listen to this song I think the coma should be after yavaÅŸ yavaÅŸ bu aÅŸk fazla sana | | | 2008年 10月 14日 22:04 | | |
I beg your pardon but,
who takes slowly , slowly his/her clothes off
for the rain thinking that it would rain,
| | | 2008年 10月 14日 22:17 | | | In the english translation, mystère in french, is mystery in english, not mysterious (mystérieu . However, it could also mean secret.
Perhaps somebody could tell me why the "x" appears as a screwed up face above. | | | 2008年 10月 14日 23:09 | | | Aha! Hello itsatrap100, this happens when you type an "x" then close the bracket just after. You've got to leave a space between the "x" and the last bracket. ( mystérieux )
(If you don't you'll always get a result that will be malheureu : : | | | 2008年 10月 16日 20:12 | | |
Yes, I figured it out. |
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