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翻訳 - 英語 -トルコ語 - something's gotten hold of my heart keeping my...現状 翻訳
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カテゴリ 表現 この翻訳依頼は意味だけで結構です。 | something's gotten hold of my heart keeping my... | | 原稿の言語: 英語
something's gotten hold of my heart keeping my soul and my senses apart something's gotten into my life cutting it's way through my dreams like a knife turning me up, and turning me down making me smile, and making me frown |
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| Bir ÅŸey kalbimi çaldı. | | 翻訳の言語: トルコ語
Bir şey kalbimi ele geçirdi. Ruhumu ve hislerimi birbirinden ayrı tutan Bir şey hayatıma girdi. Rüyalarımdan bir bıçak gibi geçen Beni alt üst eden Beni güldüren ve kaşlarımı çattıran. |
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最終承認・編集者 handyy - 2009年 4月 23日 17:08
最新記事 | | | | | 2009年 4月 21日 14:20 | | | Hi, I couldn't understand this part "cutting it's way through my dreams like a knife". The intended meaning is something like "Something cut my dreams like a knife", but grammatically something is wrong, I guess. Could you please help me with it?
CC: kafetzou lilian canale | | | 2009年 4月 21日 15:54 | | | It should be "its" not "it's". Other than that, nothing is wrong with the English grammar. | | | 2009年 4月 21日 15:59 | | | This is a nice translation, but there are a few misunderstandings, I think.
1) "to get hold of" is not the same as to "steal" - it's more like "to hold onto", so maybe "tutaklamak" would be better.
2) The line about the dreams does not say it entered my dreams - it says it cut through my dreams.
3) "turning me up and turning me down" is more like "mixing me up" - it comes from the expression "upside down", I think.
| | | 2009年 4月 21日 23:11 | | | Thanks for your explanations Laura.
1) "something's gotten hold of my heart"--> I think this part would be more accurate as "Birşey kalbimi ele geçirdi" rather than "Birşey kalbimi tutukladı."
2) "Rüyalarım sayesinde/yoluyla bir bıçak gibi/misali yolunu kesen". What do you think about it?
3) I thought "turning me up and turning me down" was translated accurately, but you know this language better than me; so if you say so, then it is OK.
Then, is this right: "Beni allak bullak/alt üst eden" ? | | | 2009年 4月 22日 00:19 | | | 1) good
2) not so good - It cuts through my dreams like a knife - where did you get "sayesinde/yoluyla" and "yolunu"? I would say something more like this: Rüyalarımdan bıçak gibi geçiyor. But I'm not sure. How would you say "It cuts through a metal pipe like a knife through butter"? That's the meaning of "cutting through" here.
3) Yes - alt üst. | | | 2009年 4月 22日 00:31 | | | But it says "cutting its way through my dreams like a knife".
I am not sure about "Rüyalarımdan bıçak gibi geçiyor.". I guess it doesn't convey the correct meaning. | | | 2009年 4月 22日 00:40 | | | To cut ones way means to cut a path through an obstacle. | | | 2009年 4月 23日 17:07 | | | Then "Rüyalarımdan bıçak gibi geçen" is fine. Thank you so much for your help Laura. |
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