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Translation - Turkish-English - Erbil’ in yanlışlığı sadece çalışanların yaptığı...

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Erbil’ in yanlışlığı sadece çalışanların yaptığı...
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Submitted by jalebilen
Source language: Turkish

Erbil’ in yanlışlığı sadece çalışanların yaptığı işi önemsemiş sadece onlar ne kadar iş yaparsa şirketinin o kadar yükseleceğini ve yükseldiği kadar da para kazanılacağını düşünmüştür . Çalışanların arasındaki gelir dağılımını ve gelirler arasındaki eşitsizlik ile ilgili hiç önlem almamıştır sadece onun için önemli olan beklenti. Ücretlendirme sanki devlet memurluğu sistemi gibi düşünülmüş işini yapsın yapmasın ücretini alıyor.

Title
Where Erbil is wrong
Translation
English

Translated by kafetzou
Target language: English

Where Erbil is wrong is in only giving importance to the work done by the employees and in thinking that the company will only rise as far as the amount of work they put into it, and that the amount of money earned will be in accordance with the amount the company has risen. He has taken no steps regarding the distribution of income among the workers and the inequality among their incomes - the only thing that is important to him is his expectations. The salary system seems to have been designed like the public civil service system - whether one does his work or not, he gets his salary.
Validated by dramati - 17 January 2008 13:52





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14 January 2008 08:21

dramati
Number of messages: 972
"and that only as much money will be earned as it has risen." This could be phrased better and more clearly in English.

public civil servant system = public civil service system


16 January 2008 17:21

dramati
Number of messages: 972
How about making a few changes?

17 January 2008 06:19

kafetzou
Number of messages: 7963
I don't know why I'm not on the notifications list, but I didn't receive any notice that you had written these messages.

Whenever you want to make sure that a translator or an expert gets notified of a message that you write under a translation, check the notifications list under your comment before you send it, and put a check mark by the name of the person you want to notify. That's the system I've been trying to get you to use. Do you understand now?

17 January 2008 06:23

kafetzou
Number of messages: 7963
I hope this edit works - to be honest I'm still not thrilled with it, and I'd be open to any suggestions on your part.

17 January 2008 06:36

dramati
Number of messages: 972
I don't know...you are really great in both English and Turkish...maybe it could be polished a little bit more, like this:

Where Erbil is wrong is in only giving importance to the work done by the workers(employees) and in thinking that the company will only rise as far as the amount they work(of work they put into it), and that the amount of money earned will be (in accordance with)according to the amount the company has risen.
He has taken no steps regarding the distribution of income among the workers and the inequality among the (their) incomes - the only thing that is important to him is his expectations. The salary system seems to have been conceived (from the public civil service system)of like the public civil service system - whether the worker does his work or not, he gets his salary.

The stuff inside the ( ) is a possible suggestion. But still, as it is, it stands on its own.

CC: kafetzou

17 January 2008 07:15

kafetzou
Number of messages: 7963
Yay - you did it! I'll make some of the changes you suggest.

17 January 2008 07:29

kafetzou
Number of messages: 7963
What do you think of it now?

17 January 2008 08:34

dramati
Number of messages: 972
Wonderful. But you always are. I love your writing style.