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Aus Sicht des Allgemeinen Sozialdienstes im Amt...

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Source language: German

Aus Sicht des Allgemeinen Sozialdienstes im Amt fÃ¼r Kinder, Jugend und Familie der Stadt ist es im Interesse des Kindeswohls sinnvoll, Frau Stella die alleinige elterliche Sorge fÃ¼r ihre Tochter zu Ã¼bertragen. Die von Herrn vorgebrachten massiven EinwÃ¤nde gegen die Erziehungseignung der Mutter (mangelhafte GesundheitsfÃ¼rsorge) haben mit groÃŸer Wahrscheinlichkeit und nach der Ãœberzeugung des Allgemeinen Sozialdienstes keine reale Grundlage.

Title	give child to mother, objections baseless
Translation English Translated by Una Smith	Target language: English From the perspective of the General Social Service in the municipal Office for Children, Youth and Family, it is significantly in the interest of child welfare to grant Mrs. Stella sole custody of her daughter. The massive objections brought by the gentleman against the parental fitness of the mother (inadequate attention to health) in all probability and in the conviction of the General Social Service have no material basis.
Remarks about the translation	Translation from German to (American) English. "Sole custody" is an idiom; I think "alleinige elterliche Sorge" could also be translated as "exclusive parental rights", which is not exactly the same as sole custody. "Ihre" can also be translated "their".

Validated by lilian canale

- 1 October 2008 19:19

Last messages

	Author	Message
		30 September 2008 20:28
	nika1989 Number of messages: 2	poniewaz jest troche bez sensu napisane
		30 September 2008 22:47
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	nika, Could you please post your comments in English?
		30 September 2008 22:47
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	Oops! CC: nika1989
		1 October 2008 00:28
	jollyo Number of messages: 330	- sinnvoll: sensible - ihre: her (?) (I have the idea the text is written from the perspective of one party, and not both of the parents) - 'Herrn' is definitely plural: gentlemen - Erziehungseignung: parenting fitness (I miss the translation of 'Erziehung' here) - GesundheitsfÃ¼rsorge: health care - the massive objections have
		1 October 2008 05:12
	Una Smith Number of messages: 429	- sinnvoll: meaningful, hence significant - ihre: perhaps a typo (ihr would yield "her daughter", but if the gentleman is the father then ihre, their daughter, makes sense - Herrn not Herren; genitive, not plural - Erziehungseignung: parenting, redundant in this context, is not idiomatic; parental is also redundant but more idiomatic - GesundheitsfÃ¼rsorge: idiom again; English speakers tend to reserve "health care" for the profession; a mother does not supply health care. - the massive objections ... have: jollyo is correct. Jollyo, thanks for your copyedit queries. I will make the changes.
		1 October 2008 05:36
	Una Smith Number of messages: 429	lilian, nika1989's comment ''poniewaz jest troche bez sensu napisane'' literally is ''because it is a little without sense written''. Jollyo, I have made corrections per your comments. CC: lilian canale nika1989 jollyo
		1 October 2008 10:27
	jollyo Number of messages: 330	'ihre Tochter' cannot be a typo. If translated to 'her daugther' or 'their daugther', both would be 'ihre Tochter'. I still think in the context of this text (the perspective of the mother being granted custody or not) it should be HER. Herrn vs. Herren... OOPS. Of course you're right here
		1 October 2008 17:24
	Una Smith Number of messages: 429	Okay, her daughter. Jollyo, are you satisfied? If so, I think this translation can be validated.
		3 October 2008 00:01
	jollyo Number of messages: 330	Thanks for the adjustment. The text 'sounds' good to me.