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poniewaz jest troche bez sensu napisane

nika,

Could you please post your comments in English?

Oops!


CC: nika1989

- sinnvoll: sensible
- ihre: her (?) (I have the idea the text is written from the perspective of one party, and not both of the parents)
- 'Herrn' is definitely plural: gentlemen
- Erziehungseignung: parenting fitness (I miss the translation of 'Erziehung' here)
- Gesundheitsfürsorge: health care
- the massive objections have

- sinnvoll: meaningful, hence significant
- ihre: perhaps a typo (ihr would yield "her daughter", but if the gentleman is the father then ihre, their daughter, makes sense
- Herrn not Herren; genitive, not plural
- Erziehungseignung: parenting, redundant in this context, is not idiomatic; parental is also redundant but more idiomatic
- Gesundheitsfürsorge: idiom again; English speakers tend to reserve "health care" for the profession; a mother does not supply health care.
- the massive objections ... have: jollyo is correct.

Jollyo, thanks for your copyedit queries. I will make the changes.

lilian, nika1989's comment ''poniewaz jest troche bez sensu napisane'' literally is ''because it is a little without sense written''.

Jollyo, I have made corrections per your comments.

CC: lilian canale nika1989 jollyo

'ihre Tochter' cannot be a typo.
If translated to 'her daugther' or 'their daugther', both would be 'ihre Tochter'.
I still think in the context of this text (the perspective of the mother being granted custody or not) it should be HER.

Herrn vs. Herren... OOPS. Of course you're right here

Okay, her daughter. Jollyo, are you satisfied? If so, I think this translation can be validated.

Thanks for the adjustment.
The text 'sounds' good to me.